I don't know if this is already planned for the next update, but you could add a different kind of text box for when a character is thinking about something, like a gray thought cloud or have the thought be in brackets for example (wow that's a cute outfit). Just thought that'd make it easier to understand when the characters are thinking about something or actually talking to another character. another thing could be to have someone proofread the dialogue so that it makes more sense, I get what the characters are trying to say but it would be nice to have it be grammatically correct so that its super easy to understand. And I'm sorry if this isn't helpful but keep up the good work!
Don't worry, I love the feeback! The different color for "thinking" can be a great idea, I'll think about it!
About the proof reader, that's already done. There are several people helping me, so you will notice the difference in next version of the game. Even for all the past content, will be fixed!
Oh, I have prepared something far better than a journal. You will see in next version of the game. Will have several helpfull stuff for the player. Thanks for playing it!
The game is very good and shows promise but please consider getting a proofreader because the English is very rough to the point of getting distracting at times.
I understand, no worries, I already got people who are actively helping me. You should notice a strong difference in next version of the game. Thanks for playing it and the feeback!
It's the second version, don't worry. Same as PC and the others. It just says version 1 cause it was the first version i released for android, but it's actually v0.2
Why is version 0.2 a .zip file and in the same file as all the other devices also why is 5GB I'm just curious but the first version was really good (even tho my tablet crashed like 7 times on 1 animation XD) but yea just wanted to say that and keep up the good work
it's good. many animations don't loop properly and translation is poor but overall it's a cute game. the fact that it's original and not just using characters from genshit or popular animes is a plus, also the fact that you went and piled up animations instead of just using poor quality AI generated images is a good move. i'm waiting for next updates :)
Thank you! Then I'm pretty sure you will love next version, which comes with really really nice animations, far better done, you will see. Thanks for playing the game!
I downloaded this game literally yesterday and fell in love with the game. I do have pros and cons, but what I will say is that the pros HEAVILY outweigh the cons.
Pros:
- The game characters are VERY well designed. Not only that, but their character development is excellent as well! Akaime not really getting along very well with Katsune in the first version of the game made sense, but seeing her kinda start to accept Katsune in the second as time goes on is evidence of that character development.
- The way you're setting up the big bad for this game is absolutely phenomenal, giving her a dream of proving AI is superior to humans, and making that a reality. And making sure she's not doing this as a solo mission was a great idea.
- The story so far is great! Sure, a little packed for two versions, but as time goes on, its only going to get better! So I can't complain whatsoever! Only two versions in and I'm biting my nails over the next update!
Cons:
- The spelling is a little off, but that is perfectly okay! I was still able to understand everything people were trying to say.
That's about it for me! I absolutely love this project and I can't wait to keep playing it in the future!
If you do want help with the spelling in the future, do let me know, I'd love to help you with that if you'd let me!
Hey! Thanks for the feedback! It was lovely to hear everything, that you enjoyed it so much! I really hope you enjoy what I have prepared for future versions.
The spelling will be fixed next version, don't worry. I had several help to correct all those mistakes, even future ones! But thanks either way, you're awesome!
surprisingly great art and animation, but the game felt like is was being railroaded into being a scumbag, and the grammar and spelling are all over the place, seems like english is the writer/dev's second language, which is fine but it needs someone to go over it. i will definitely follow the development.
Don't worry, I got already people helping me with the grammar, should be far better for future versions. And of course, everything fixed of past versions
Love the game so far, def looking forward to what comes next. I'm definitely liking the fact the MC isn't a complete pushover, even with the femdom aspect, he actually has some self-respect for himself. It very rare to find a MC in a game that has femdom where they aren't a complete pushover. Looking forward to more updates! Keep up the good work!
It's a cool concept but the majority of the text boxes get cut off in the android version on version 1 of the game. I'm not sure how it looks on version 2 but it's kinda unclear how to set that up on Android, so I'm not gonna try to.
Must be your antivirus or anything else about your computer. I can guarantee you the game is completly safe. Me and thousands of people who played and enjoyed it already.
I want to give this a run but based on what read about the MC being a bullied bitch, the addition of a sandbox and the possibility of NTR....I think I'll hold off till the tags become more clear. But I say the art work looks amazing
In my opinion, he's not really a bullied bitch, just ran into a couple bad situations. However, I think there are already many scenes that will allow you to enjoy the game! Of course, if you don't feel like it, that's completely fine!
In my opinion, any sandbox feels a bit empty at the start. However, as I add more and more content, hopefully you will change your mind and enjoy to explore and finding out many different paths and surprising situations!
I love your game it's great but I enjoy visual novels not Sandbox at all, maybe if the game have free room from time to time it's okay but other than that I just don't like it
Also is this game will have NTR? Cuz I don't like the NTR games and it will really Destroys the game completely so please let me know
And the size of the game is really big for not much content, I suggest making the images JPG or WebP
And make the MC have stronger personality unless you are going to make the game NTR.....
If I were to provide some constructive criticism the protagonist seems kind of a too much of a "outsider" trope of the generic loner self-depreciating protagonist who don't think much of themselves you see far too often in visual novels. I feel like he could either use a bit more fleshing out why they're so depreciating or think of themselves as unpopular or unworthy, or could grow a bit more of a spine or confidence.
Maybe its just cause I have too much sense of self-worth but it can be kind of grating trying to relate with cliche protagonists like these who have no real ambitions or go on a internal monologue of how mediocre they think they are, even though their situation is better than most people's these days (such as having friends, a supporting family <both monetary and emotionally>, a job/education, etc)
Any feedback is appreciated! So, thank you for taking the time to provide a constructive critique.
About the mc, don't worry, he doesn't see himself as unworthy, nor he thinks he's having a bad life at all. Actually, he points out that he's happy in the very first seconds of the game. He just ran to some bad situations, like everyone in their life. Yet, as story continues, he will develop even better. It's already something I had planned, I think you will enjoy to see what's to come. But I understand you think this way! It's just a silly excuse for really fun scenes that will come soon~
Hey, really like the game thus far. Interesting story, good development of the characters so far. One of my favs. I would like to make a suggestion. The characters need some way to track their locations and things like that. For Akaime, you're hunting around for her and then you get the clues but what happens if you stop playing for a few days or play through and then in the next update, you forget where she is or what you need to do. I'm happy to give me info you need. Anyway, thanks!
Thank you for playing the game! Glad you enjoyed it so far! Don't worry, that's a feature I knew beforehand the game needs. It's comming with next update, in v0.3, the one I'm working on right now. Thanks for the suggestion either way!
Please fix this in android, I can't go outside and the text goes off screen for me. If there's a way to fix this please tell me (I may be doing things wrong)
To describe the problem in more detail, I will say that the game creates black borders on the sides of the screen. All game content except text is scaled along these borders. The text is aligned to the left, but it is not adjacent to these black borders, but as if to the phone case. Because of this, it turns out that the black borders overlap it.
Hey, im getting an error when i try to access the map at any point in the day on the android version. Could you look into it? I can get a screenshot or two of the error if you need that.
I really dislike all of these low effort looking games. They are no fun to play. But this was one of those games that were really different. The image quality is insane and that alone is already a huge enough plus point for me. The character design is also lovely with some pretty unique looking people.
Wow! I really appreciate your feedback! It's super rewarding to see people who can appreciate all the hard work, gives me even more energy to improve it even more, thanks!
Let's be honest, a lot of the people here are only here for a good fap and move on to the next game.
I am always looking for games with either high quality or that have an amazing story and those are exactly the games that deserve a lot of attention, but unfortunately alot of them don't get the attention they deserve.
I sincerely hope that you can continue doing what you love and that people will support your patreon.
Was there an issue just porting it as an apk? AAB files suck. i had to pay for an aab downloader just to get the app installed, and sat for 15+ minutes staring at a "downloading assets" screen and it still didnt boot to the game. if you're gonna make an android port, do it right. Yikes.
Calm down, everyone makes mistakes in your case, I think you didn't know how to port apk files, don't despair, this will always be a headache, I appreciate your dedication for wanting to bring this game to Android users, I'm very grateful for dedicating your heart to this wonderful game ❤️
Thank you for fixing the apk issue, but now half the text is off screen. the game looks great so i wont be negative on that front, but functionality is a massive issue it seems. I dont like being overly negative about a game but I see promise in this one, so it's hard not to point out the problems when they're this bad. PC might run fine because it's being developed on a PC. You're automatically testing it for that platform while developing it. If you're unable to test on different platforms because you don't have access to them, I can understand. I unfortunately, however, have a bad first impression since the android port was released in a way that seemed like a band-aid solution. That just leaves a bad taste in my mouth seeing that even after fixing the issue it still has more issues piled on top of it. Maybe I'm being overly critical but I've played a lot of VNs and you're having issues that I've never seen anyone else have even in the early builds. Even if they did, I wouldn't know because they waited and fixed the issues before releasing it to the public. If the game isn't even in a functional state, don't even bother releasing it until it's fixed. No one will complain because either way they end up not really being able to play it. It just leaves a better impression when people get their hands on something and it actually works. Haste makes waste, slow down and take the time to do it right.
At the moment not a lot, but, it is interesting, entertaining, and should be amazing later on. I think there are a few ecchi moments, but that's it for now.
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I don't know if this is already planned for the next update, but you could add a different kind of text box for when a character is thinking about something, like a gray thought cloud or have the thought be in brackets for example (wow that's a cute outfit). Just thought that'd make it easier to understand when the characters are thinking about something or actually talking to another character. another thing could be to have someone proofread the dialogue so that it makes more sense, I get what the characters are trying to say but it would be nice to have it be grammatically correct so that its super easy to understand. And I'm sorry if this isn't helpful but keep up the good work!
Don't worry, I love the feeback! The different color for "thinking" can be a great idea, I'll think about it!
About the proof reader, that's already done. There are several people helping me, so you will notice the difference in next version of the game. Even for all the past content, will be fixed!
Thanks for playing the game!
glad I could be of help and I can't wait for the update, keep up the good work!!
The Android zip for version 2 doesn't work, literally. You can download it but you cannot install the game, idk how maybe use apk?
If you download the android version literally here, you will notice is an apk file, not .zip. Also it works, check it
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Really good , but consider adding a journal where you can see tasks and progress.
Oh, I have prepared something far better than a journal. You will see in next version of the game. Will have several helpfull stuff for the player. Thanks for playing it!
The game is very good and shows promise but please consider getting a proofreader because the English is very rough to the point of getting distracting at times.
I understand, no worries, I already got people who are actively helping me. You should notice a strong difference in next version of the game. Thanks for playing it and the feeback!
There's no version 2 for Android?
It's the second version, don't worry. Same as PC and the others. It just says version 1 cause it was the first version i released for android, but it's actually v0.2
Is there a update for android by chance
Yes, i will as soon as possible, once I fixed the annoying bug of the text
Why is version 0.2 a .zip file and in the same file as all the other devices also why is 5GB I'm just curious but the first version was really good (even tho my tablet crashed like 7 times on 1 animation XD) but yea just wanted to say that and keep up the good work
Pics and animations overall were quite heavy, but I'm working on it so will consume less resources. Thanks for the feedback and playing the game!
it's good.
many animations don't loop properly and translation is poor but overall it's a cute game. the fact that it's original and not just using characters from genshit or popular animes is a plus, also the fact that you went and piled up animations instead of just using poor quality AI generated images is a good move. i'm waiting for next updates :)
Thank you! Then I'm pretty sure you will love next version, which comes with really really nice animations, far better done, you will see. Thanks for playing the game!
I need to make it known.
I LOVE THIS GAME!
I downloaded this game literally yesterday and fell in love with the game. I do have pros and cons, but what I will say is that the pros HEAVILY outweigh the cons.
Pros:
- The game characters are VERY well designed. Not only that, but their character development is excellent as well! Akaime not really getting along very well with Katsune in the first version of the game made sense, but seeing her kinda start to accept Katsune in the second as time goes on is evidence of that character development.
- The way you're setting up the big bad for this game is absolutely phenomenal, giving her a dream of proving AI is superior to humans, and making that a reality. And making sure she's not doing this as a solo mission was a great idea.
- The story so far is great! Sure, a little packed for two versions, but as time goes on, its only going to get better! So I can't complain whatsoever! Only two versions in and I'm biting my nails over the next update!
Cons:
- The spelling is a little off, but that is perfectly okay! I was still able to understand everything people were trying to say.
That's about it for me! I absolutely love this project and I can't wait to keep playing it in the future!
If you do want help with the spelling in the future, do let me know, I'd love to help you with that if you'd let me!
- TheAntiLife
Hey! Thanks for the feedback! It was lovely to hear everything, that you enjoyed it so much! I really hope you enjoy what I have prepared for future versions.
The spelling will be fixed next version, don't worry. I had several help to correct all those mistakes, even future ones! But thanks either way, you're awesome!
surprisingly great art and animation, but the game felt like is was being railroaded into being a scumbag, and the grammar and spelling are all over the place, seems like english is the writer/dev's second language, which is fine but it needs someone to go over it. i will definitely follow the development.
Don't worry, I got already people helping me with the grammar, should be far better for future versions. And of course, everything fixed of past versions
Catgirls for the win
Totally agreed! Thanks for playing the game
Text isn't centered for Android
Love the game so far, def looking forward to what comes next. I'm definitely liking the fact the MC isn't a complete pushover, even with the femdom aspect, he actually has some self-respect for himself. It very rare to find a MC in a game that has femdom where they aren't a complete pushover. Looking forward to more updates! Keep up the good work!
Thank you for the lovely feedback! MC is getting better as the story continues, you will see~!
Merry Christmas!
It's a cool concept but the majority of the text boxes get cut off in the android version on version 1 of the game. I'm not sure how it looks on version 2 but it's kinda unclear how to set that up on Android, so I'm not gonna try to.
I am still not sure why that happened in Android, I'll solve it asap.
Merry Christmas!
Whenever I download the file, it says corrupted archive
Must be your antivirus or anything else about your computer.
I can guarantee you the game is completly safe. Me and thousands of people who played and enjoyed it already.
Merry christmas!
ok, thanks though
Damn, I was interested until I saw the possibility of NTR. Why is there a romance and dating sim tag if the girl is going to cheat on the MC?
There is no NTR. And I have no plans for NTR.
Hope that clear your doubts.
Alright thanks, I'll check it out.
Is there a difference in version 1 and 2
Why not just look in the Dev log
I want to give this a run but based on what read about the MC being a bullied bitch, the addition of a sandbox and the possibility of NTR....I think I'll hold off till the tags become more clear. But I say the art work looks amazing
In my opinion, he's not really a bullied bitch, just ran into a couple bad situations. However, I think there are already many scenes that will allow you to enjoy the game! Of course, if you don't feel like it, that's completely fine!
There is no NTR, won't be included btw.
huh alright. the story sounds really good but why turn it into sandbox
the sandbox kill it...
In my opinion, any sandbox feels a bit empty at the start. However, as I add more and more content, hopefully you will change your mind and enjoy to explore and finding out many different paths and surprising situations!
Thanks for playing the game tho!
I love your game it's great but I enjoy visual novels not Sandbox at all, maybe if the game have free room from time to time it's okay but other than that I just don't like it
Also is this game will have NTR? Cuz I don't like the NTR games and it will really Destroys the game completely so please let me know
And the size of the game is really big for not much content, I suggest making the images JPG or WebP
And make the MC have stronger personality unless you are going to make the game NTR.....
I respect it! Not everyone need to enjoy sanbox, it's fair.
There is no NTR. And I have no plans for NTR.
Yeah, I'll probably change pics to webp, I already had to do it for the android version.
MC is already getting stronger personality, even more things are comming related to it.
If I were to provide some constructive criticism the protagonist seems kind of a too much of a "outsider" trope of the generic loner self-depreciating protagonist who don't think much of themselves you see far too often in visual novels. I feel like he could either use a bit more fleshing out why they're so depreciating or think of themselves as unpopular or unworthy, or could grow a bit more of a spine or confidence.
Maybe its just cause I have too much sense of self-worth but it can be kind of grating trying to relate with cliche protagonists like these who have no real ambitions or go on a internal monologue of how mediocre they think they are, even though their situation is better than most people's these days (such as having friends, a supporting family <both monetary and emotionally>, a job/education, etc)
Any feedback is appreciated! So, thank you for taking the time to provide a constructive critique.
About the mc, don't worry, he doesn't see himself as unworthy, nor he thinks he's having a bad life at all. Actually, he points out that he's happy in the very first seconds of the game. He just ran to some bad situations, like everyone in their life. Yet, as story continues, he will develop even better. It's already something I had planned, I think you will enjoy to see what's to come. But I understand you think this way! It's just a silly excuse for really fun scenes that will come soon~
Thanks for playing the game!
Text box on Android is too much left side of the screen and it is annoying to read
is there no sex scenes right now? everything says i have to wait for another version. im just confused, i played the game in full but havent seen any
Hey! Thanks for playing the game! I suggest you to join the discord server and check the channel zero-codes, may help you~
游戏还是很不错的，就是没中文。
The text on Mobile seems to go off of the screen at the left making it a bit unreadable, it's just a little annoying
Hey everyone! What is the AIDrone code ?
Hi! The codes are hidden in game. However, if you don't want to find them, join my discord. There is a channel there with all available codes.
Can I please have a new link to the Discord server? For some reason Discord itself says that the link has expired
Hi please me give a diskord
Hey, really like the game thus far. Interesting story, good development of the characters so far. One of my favs. I would like to make a suggestion. The characters need some way to track their locations and things like that. For Akaime, you're hunting around for her and then you get the clues but what happens if you stop playing for a few days or play through and then in the next update, you forget where she is or what you need to do. I'm happy to give me info you need. Anyway, thanks!
Thank you for playing the game! Glad you enjoyed it so far!
Don't worry, that's a feature I knew beforehand the game needs. It's comming with next update, in v0.3, the one I'm working on right now. Thanks for the suggestion either way!
Thanks man! Love it so far.
Please fix this in android, I can't go outside and the text goes off screen for me. If there's a way to fix this please tell me (I may be doing things wrong)
Faça uma tradução para o Brasil se em português eu adoro seu jogo
On Android, Half of the text remains off the screen. Cant understand anything, pls fix 🙁
Should work with another resolution. Apparently doesn't work for all resolutions, I don't know why.
I have the same problem with resolution. A part of text on the left side of screen for some reason is out of screen. Maybe it is possible to fix it?
There is no resolution setting on the phones.
Quite weird. It should be centered, in the middle of the screen. I have no idea why the text went to the left, quite weird. I'll investigate it
please fix it as soon as possible
Hey, im getting an error when i try to access the map at any point in the day on the android version. Could you look into it? I can get a screenshot or two of the error if you need that.
Fixed, new android version should have that bug fixed. Sorry for the trouble!
honestly one of those very well made games.
I really dislike all of these low effort looking games. They are no fun to play. But this was one of those games that were really different. The image quality is insane and that alone is already a huge enough plus point for me. The character design is also lovely with some pretty unique looking people.
All in all a game that's worth playing
Wow! I really appreciate your feedback! It's super rewarding to see people who can appreciate all the hard work, gives me even more energy to improve it even more, thanks!
Let's be honest, a lot of the people here are only here for a good fap and move on to the next game.
I am always looking for games with either high quality or that have an amazing story and those are exactly the games that deserve a lot of attention, but unfortunately alot of them don't get the attention they deserve.
I sincerely hope that you can continue doing what you love and that people will support your patreon.
Was there an issue just porting it as an apk? AAB files suck. i had to pay for an aab downloader just to get the app installed, and sat for 15+ minutes staring at a "downloading assets" screen and it still didnt boot to the game. if you're gonna make an android port, do it right. Yikes.
There, should be working now. Yes, there were issues with porting to apk but I fixed them all, hopefully!
Calm down, everyone makes mistakes in your case, I think you didn't know how to port apk files, don't despair, this will always be a headache, I appreciate your dedication for wanting to bring this game to Android users, I'm very grateful for dedicating your heart to this wonderful game ❤️
Of course! I released already the .apk, should work now.
Had to run into some trouble but I finally made it.
Thanks for your words!
Thank you for fixing the apk issue, but now half the text is off screen. the game looks great so i wont be negative on that front, but functionality is a massive issue it seems. I dont like being overly negative about a game but I see promise in this one, so it's hard not to point out the problems when they're this bad. PC might run fine because it's being developed on a PC. You're automatically testing it for that platform while developing it. If you're unable to test on different platforms because you don't have access to them, I can understand. I unfortunately, however, have a bad first impression since the android port was released in a way that seemed like a band-aid solution. That just leaves a bad taste in my mouth seeing that even after fixing the issue it still has more issues piled on top of it. Maybe I'm being overly critical but I've played a lot of VNs and you're having issues that I've never seen anyone else have even in the early builds. Even if they did, I wouldn't know because they waited and fixed the issues before releasing it to the public. If the game isn't even in a functional state, don't even bother releasing it until it's fixed. No one will complain because either way they end up not really being able to play it. It just leaves a better impression when people get their hands on something and it actually works. Haste makes waste, slow down and take the time to do it right.
Thank you bro for making this wonderful game available to us mere commoners❤️
Of course! Thanks you for playing it!
Very good, waiting for v.3
Glad you enjoyed it! Working on it rn!
Finally v.2
Yay! Finally! Hope you enjoy it!
Before I download...
What content am I expecting as a whole?
At the moment not a lot, but, it is interesting, entertaining, and should be amazing later on.
I think there are a few ecchi moments, but that's it for now.
Hmm… let’s check out this new game
Hope you enjoyed it~
more girl?
Many, many more~
So far its great. Can't wait to see more of the girls, both current and new.
Thank you for everything! Glad you enjoyed it! I won't stop working on it and make sure to continue proving an amazing story for everyone to enjoy~
Will we have a Android version ?
Yes! Actually v0.2 comes with Android version already.
Check my last Development log if you'd like more information, just a bit up there.
Oh,that's very nice.Thanks!I will focus on that.