So I gave this AVN a try and it was about average.
The story was pretty good, AI is an interesting and controversial subject and the idea of Ai girlfriends even more so. If you think about it, its essentially the subject of movies like Bladerunner.
But there were many, many issues I found with this AVN.
First the spelling and grammar need a ton of work. Most of the time the spelling is fine, but the overall use of language is poor. Its technically correct but sounds stilted or awkward to a native English speaker.
Secondly the choices presented in this AVN don't really matter. I went through the whole story rejecting or refusing every single lewd, doing my best to ruin every single relationship and do you know what I noticed?
A lot of the time the story behaves as if I had been chasing after all the girls, doing all the nice stuff.
This was epitomized by the character Kyuu, I had the MC reject her and yet even after the scene with her walking away and the AVN explicitly stating that the rejection was final I still saw another scene with Kyuu and the MC being romantic.
Almost like the choice was offered but not really followed through on...
My advice on how to handle this Illusion of choice problem is the same advice I give every Dev I see it from (Which is most). Get rid of it, turn this AVN into a Kinetic Novel. You will save time and energy by simplifying the Dev process.
If your unwilling to completely convert the AVN into a KN then consider putting in an option to switch it back and forth from AVN to KN. But that's more programming, rather than less, hence why I suggest just getting rid of the choices altogether. Just assume your readers want to see all the lewds and get it over with.
Thirdly I think there might be too many girls in this AVN. I like variety but this is getting ridiculous. I think that it would be better if there were fewer characters so that more time could be spent developing those selected characters.
Finally I would like to say that looking at your Development Log, it looks like you have a fast dev time. Roughly 3 months per release.
That is extremely impressive! Most devs struggle to maintain a 6 month release schedule so seeing such a fast dev cycle is just so remarkable.
Reaaaally nice game. Smooth and responsive interface, damn good animated scenes and an interesting story to go along with it. The only thing that "feels" a bit off is how fast the main story progresses sometimes, but the great side stories help out in that regard.
Will definitely drop some cash on the next update :)
Man, it seems like every page I go onto recently has scammers pretending to have an update link in the comments. Remember to block and report when you see them.
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Hi.
So I gave this AVN a try and it was about average.
The story was pretty good, AI is an interesting and controversial subject and the idea of Ai girlfriends even more so. If you think about it, its essentially the subject of movies like Bladerunner.
But there were many, many issues I found with this AVN.
First the spelling and grammar need a ton of work. Most of the time the spelling is fine, but the overall use of language is poor. Its technically correct but sounds stilted or awkward to a native English speaker.
Secondly the choices presented in this AVN don't really matter. I went through the whole story rejecting or refusing every single lewd, doing my best to ruin every single relationship and do you know what I noticed?
A lot of the time the story behaves as if I had been chasing after all the girls, doing all the nice stuff.
This was epitomized by the character Kyuu, I had the MC reject her and yet even after the scene with her walking away and the AVN explicitly stating that the rejection was final I still saw another scene with Kyuu and the MC being romantic.
Almost like the choice was offered but not really followed through on...
My advice on how to handle this Illusion of choice problem is the same advice I give every Dev I see it from (Which is most). Get rid of it, turn this AVN into a Kinetic Novel. You will save time and energy by simplifying the Dev process.
If your unwilling to completely convert the AVN into a KN then consider putting in an option to switch it back and forth from AVN to KN. But that's more programming, rather than less, hence why I suggest just getting rid of the choices altogether. Just assume your readers want to see all the lewds and get it over with.
Thirdly I think there might be too many girls in this AVN. I like variety but this is getting ridiculous. I think that it would be better if there were fewer characters so that more time could be spent developing those selected characters.
Finally I would like to say that looking at your Development Log, it looks like you have a fast dev time. Roughly 3 months per release.
That is extremely impressive! Most devs struggle to maintain a 6 month release schedule so seeing such a fast dev cycle is just so remarkable.
Keep it up.
Good
Im in the early game and it says to visit Katsue's room, but that isnt an option at home. Am I missing something?
This game is absolutely badass! The scenes get better by the mission and this game has so much potential. Made an account just to spread the word!
Right! Totally worth it, the girls are super hot, and the scenes are the stuff dreams are made out of!
It says u must progress yuirko's story but i don't see her how do I fix this
Sometimes you have to progress other characters first for the story
Love the writing, and that fact that it does rail you into being horny all the time.
Update 0.3.7 been, release it faster pls, i cant wait anymore🥲
3.7 has been released for Patreon subscribers yesterday, so it should become available for free to all after 13 more days.
Reaaaally nice game. Smooth and responsive interface, damn good animated scenes and an interesting story to go along with it. The only thing that "feels" a bit off is how fast the main story progresses sometimes, but the great side stories help out in that regard.
Will definitely drop some cash on the next update :)
wait, so effie is not virgin?
juegazo, me lo acabe entre ayer y hoy jajaja (espero la siguiente actualizacion con ganas :D)
I hope in the next day the new update release
有中文吗
Oh god Akaime you have to add more anal scenes ! It was hot
NO
everyone has different tastes you know, the best thing would be to make "optional" scenes for this kind of content.
I’m in on that, my man has spoken facts! Buttah is Life •_•
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Man, it seems like every page I go onto recently has scammers pretending to have an update link in the comments. Remember to block and report when you see them.
You mean like Leico and Donna 584? There's another called Dev V4.
It was some pages , no every . They are now been banned . Don't clik any LINK from the comments , except if its the official account of the dev
I'm teeing off on every one of them that I come across.
I did too
I accidentally pressed on it what do I do now 🥀
Loving the game so far! The Geo symbol on Rizette's chest pulled me out of the story a bit, though.
Hey, can i hide UI on mobile?
When is the next update?
快了
the updates usually takes about 4-5 month
Is there a pregnancy option?