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Some probably already have this problem but for android part of the text isnt readable because its too far on the left hope this gets fixed 

Fixed on new version already c:

the only bad thing really so far is that the text box doesnt fit on the screen on android

Fixed on new version already c:

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Encountered this error when trying to go to the "Retire" at the Outskirts iirc. Haven't tried continuing after that screen, only rollback. Windows version played on Linux.

Fixed on new version already c:

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Quite enjoyed this, had more content than I thought for being this early. I was just enjoying reading too much to even what you initially get the game for. Now THATS a mark of a good game xD

Note- There are a number of grammatical errors, whether or not they impact your experience playing may vary.

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Thanks for the feeback! I corrected many many grammatical errors already c:

Would like to play, but the Mac game file doesn't work

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Try downloading Wine, an application that helps run .exe files for non Windows platforms. Make sure to download the Windows version of the game. f you already have wine, try running "wine 'insertname.exe'"

Do you know how to use a terminal to use this input?

Oh I'm so sorry to hear that! Technially it should be alright, I just select the Mac build version for it. Seems I'll have to keep investigating the problem. It's hard for me since I don't have Mac, sorry!

Your Mac build does work, but it's not notarized. Apple wants users to only trust Apple's App Store so when you open an unsigned application macOS acts like it's scary/broken/untrustworthy. You can force it to run anyway, and I left a comment in this thread with the steps.

If you want to make an app that "just works" on Macs, it needs to be notarized. RenpyTom has info about that here. https://patreon.renpy.org/macos-notarization.htmlUnfortunately that process needs a Mac. A not-notarized app is definitely better than no app though. Game runs great once you bypass the checks.

Oh and I really like the game too BTW. Nice work!

The Mac version does work, but it's not signed by Apple so you have to do a one-off security override to make it run. If you're not comfortable with that it's best to stop here, but I think it's fair to say the risk from a Renpy game is very low. YMMV.

The steps below will add an exception for the game executable to allow it to run. It doesn't disable any macOS security checks.

1) Try to open the game will say it can't because the developer isn't verified. Click "cancel", not "Move to bin".

2) Open system settings, and go to "Privacy and security". Scroll down and you will see a message that "AIRevolution was blocked because...". Click the "Open anyway" button.

3) macOS will ask for your fingerprint or password. Do this.

4) macOS will then once again ask if you want to open the game and warn you about security and malware. Click "Open", and the game will start.

This exception will be remembered so next time you open the game it will start normally without any warnings. When a new version comes out however, you will need to go through these steps again to add a fresh exception.

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hi impossible to open the app as soon as I launch the game it quits directly I'm on mac for info

Thank you for your reply

Try downloading Wine, an application that helps run .exe files for non Windows platforms. Make sure to download the Windows version of the game. If you already have wine, try running "wine 'insertname.exe'"

Do you know how to use a terminal to use this input?

Oh I'm so sorry to hear that! Technially it should be alright, I just select the Mac build version for it. Seems I'll have to keep investigating the problem. It's hard for me since I don't have Mac, sorry!

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Can you fix in android the teks not in the middle but the game is good actually

Fixed on new version already c:

Will there be a possibility of adding the Spanish language?

So far, not yet. Comes with a lot of trouble that I may not be able to deal in the future.

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Ai Revolution 🚫

Air evolution ✔️

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The text is not on the middle

Fixed on new version already c:

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this game is honestly so good i would prefer this with v0.2 over harem hotel with the latest version

Thank you for your feedback!

when is the next version coming out?

I have just released on Patreon.
Here in Itch.io for free on 15th of this month.

Are there any sex scenes if so how to I get them?

There is a secret scene that you may be interested. In my discord channel you can check all the codes for it.

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Listen, I don't like being negative, but there's a large amount of spelling/grammar mistakes. Also, some of the lines sound like they were written by a horny 13 year old. My honest opinion is that you should revise some of your dialogue to be more mature and appropriate. But this 13 year old has good taste. More Yuriko.

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more yuriko indeed.

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Done!

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I appreciate every feeback, even negative things so don't worry! I got many help with text, now it should have far less spelling mistakes! There is more of Yuriko in the new version!

I played version 1 and it's very good, but I got to a point where I don't know what I have to do. Until now I got to the point where when talking to Akaime in his room he says "Wait for future updates" and I don't think I can do anything else. ____ Yuriko tells me about a "local" that "next time won't be forgotten" and I have an idea what to do.

You won't have that problem from now on. There is a new feature that helps tracking characters progress and story c:

Is there a place where you post the progress of the new updates? Like, "Version 3 is 70% done" or sneak peeks of the characters/new settings?

Also, really like what you have going with the game so far! Keep up the good work!

Thank you for the feeback! In the discord official server you can check anything you wish. 

New version has just been released on Patreon.

Next one will be just one month later!

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Fixed on new version already c:

Question. Is this game a demo or trial? Can I be able to play the full game without paying? Will I get the same contents the premium users get eventually but at a slower rate? If so then I'm fine with that. Please respond.

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Yes, you're able to play this game without paying at all. The game is and will always be free. There isn't premium content.
Supporters have other different rewards, the game earlier to play and special requests. They are the main reason I can keep developing the game.

Of course, I don't force anyone to support me. If you decide to play and enjoy my game, that makes me quite happy already!

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oh that's so Great news. I'll play it. I would pay but I really don't have much cash on me. So playing is my only way if supporting. Also on android the text on the left side is cut off. Please fix it .

Every review is great, its just that the text is cut off and I can't really enjoy it properly. I'm on Android btw is this fixed some how or do I need to wait for a new update, the game looks amazing really wish to play it right.

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Yeah, I'm sorry about the android part. Yet, I'll do my best for next version to get this fixed! Thanks for your feeback tho!

I don't know if this is already planned for the next update, but you could add a different kind of text box for when a character is thinking about something, like a gray thought cloud or have the thought be in brackets for example (wow that's a cute outfit). Just thought that'd make it easier to understand when the characters are thinking about something or actually talking to another character. another thing could be to have someone proofread the dialogue so that it makes more sense, I get what the characters are trying to say but it would be nice to have it be grammatically correct so that its super easy to understand. And I'm sorry if this isn't helpful but keep up the good work!

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Don't worry, I love the feeback! The different color for "thinking" can be a great idea, I'll think about it!

About the proof reader, that's already done. There are several people helping me, so you will notice the difference in next version of the game. Even for all the past content, will be fixed!

Thanks for playing the game!

glad I could be of help and I can't wait for the update, keep up the good work!!

The Android zip for version 2 doesn't work, literally. You can download it but you cannot install the game, idk how maybe use apk?

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If you download the android version literally here, you will notice is an apk file, not .zip. Also it works, check it

👍

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Really good , but consider adding a journal where you can see tasks and progress.

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Oh, I have prepared something far better than a journal. You will see in next version of the game. Will have several helpfull stuff for the player. Thanks for playing it!

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The game is very good and shows promise but please consider getting a proofreader because the English is very rough to the point of getting distracting at times.

I understand, no worries, I already got people who are actively helping me. You should notice a strong difference in next version of the game. Thanks for playing it and the feeback!

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There's no version 2 for Android?

It's the second version, don't worry. Same as PC and the others. It just says version 1 cause it was the first version i released for android, but it's actually v0.2

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Is there a update for android by chance

Yes, i will as soon as possible, once I fixed the annoying bug of the text

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Why is version 0.2 a .zip file and in the same file as all the other devices also why is 5GB I'm just curious but the first version was really good (even tho my tablet crashed like 7 times on 1 animation XD) but yea just wanted to say that and keep up the good work

Pics and animations overall were quite heavy, but I'm working on it so will consume less resources. Thanks for the feedback and playing the game!

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it's good.
many animations don't loop properly and translation is poor but overall it's a cute game. the fact that it's original and not just using characters from genshit or popular animes is a plus, also the fact that you went and piled up animations instead of just using poor quality AI generated images is a good move. i'm waiting for next updates :)

Thank you! Then I'm pretty sure you will love next version, which comes with really really nice animations, far better done, you will see. Thanks for playing the game!

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I need to make it known.

I LOVE THIS GAME!

I downloaded this game literally yesterday and fell in love with the game. I do have pros and cons, but what I will say is that the pros HEAVILY outweigh the cons.

Pros:

- The game characters are VERY well designed. Not only that, but their character development is excellent as well! Akaime not really getting along very well with Katsune in the first version of the game made sense, but seeing her kinda start to accept Katsune in the second as time goes on is evidence of that character development.

- The way you're setting up the big bad for this game is absolutely phenomenal, giving her a dream of proving AI is superior to humans, and making that a reality. And making sure she's not doing this as a solo mission was a great idea.

- The story so far is great! Sure, a little packed for two versions, but as time goes on, its only going to get better! So I can't complain whatsoever! Only two versions in and I'm biting my nails over the next update!


Cons:

- The spelling is a little off, but that is perfectly okay! I was still able to understand everything people were trying to say. 


That's about it for me! I absolutely love this project and I can't wait to keep playing it in the future! 


If you do want help with the spelling in the future, do let me know, I'd love to help you with that if you'd let me!


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Hey! Thanks for the feedback! It was lovely to hear everything, that you enjoyed it so much! I really hope you enjoy what I have prepared for future versions.

The spelling will be fixed next version, don't worry. I had several help to correct all those mistakes, even future ones! But thanks either way, you're awesome!

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surprisingly great art and animation, but the game felt like is was being railroaded into being a scumbag, and the grammar and spelling are all over the place, seems like english is the writer/dev's second language, which is fine but it needs someone to go over it. i will definitely follow the development.

Don't worry, I got already people helping me with the grammar, should be far better for future versions. And of course, everything fixed of past versions

Catgirls for the win

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Totally agreed! Thanks for playing the game

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Text isn't centered for Android

Love the game so far, def looking forward to what comes next. I'm definitely liking the fact the MC isn't a complete pushover, even with the femdom aspect, he actually has some self-respect for himself. It very rare to find a MC in a game that has femdom where they aren't a complete pushover. Looking forward to more updates! Keep up the good work!

Thank you for the lovely feedback! MC is getting better as the story continues, you will see~!

Merry Christmas!

It's a cool concept but the majority of the text boxes get cut off in the android version on version 1 of the game. I'm not sure how it looks on version 2 but it's kinda unclear how to set that up on Android, so I'm not gonna try to.

I am still not sure why that happened in Android, I'll solve it asap.

Merry Christmas!

Whenever I download the file, it says corrupted archive

Must be your antivirus or anything else about your computer.
I can guarantee you the game is completly safe. Me and thousands of people who played and enjoyed it already.

Merry christmas!

ok, thanks though

Damn, I was interested until I saw the possibility of NTR. Why is there a romance and dating sim tag if the girl is going to cheat on the MC?

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There is no NTR. And I have no plans for NTR.
Hope that clear your doubts.

Alright thanks, I'll check it out.

Is there a difference in version 1 and 2

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Why not just look in the Dev log

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I want to give this a run but based on what read about the MC being a bullied bitch, the addition of a sandbox and the possibility of NTR....I think I'll hold off till the tags become more clear.  But I say the art work looks amazing 

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In my opinion, he's not really a bullied bitch, just ran into a couple bad situations. However, I think there are already many scenes that will allow you to enjoy the game! Of course, if you don't feel like it, that's completely fine!

There is no NTR, won't be included btw.

huh alright.  the story sounds really good but why turn it into sandbox

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the sandbox kill it...

In my opinion, any sandbox feels a bit empty at the start. However, as I add more and more content, hopefully you will change your mind and enjoy to explore and finding out many different paths and surprising situations! 

Thanks for playing the game tho!

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I love your game it's great but I enjoy visual novels not Sandbox at all, maybe if the game have free room from time to time it's okay but other than that I just don't like it

Also is this game will have NTR? Cuz I don't like the NTR games and it will really Destroys the game completely so please let me know

And the size of the game is really big for not much content, I suggest making the images JPG or WebP

And make the MC have stronger personality unless you are going to make the game NTR.....

I respect it! Not everyone need to enjoy sanbox, it's fair.

There is no NTR. And I have no plans for NTR.

Yeah, I'll probably change pics to webp, I already had to do it for the android version.

MC is already getting stronger personality, even more things are comming related to it.

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If I were to provide some constructive criticism the protagonist seems kind of a too much of a "outsider" trope of the generic loner self-depreciating protagonist who don't think much of themselves you see far too often in visual novels. I feel like he could either use a bit more fleshing out why they're so depreciating or think of themselves as unpopular or unworthy, or could grow a bit more of a spine or confidence.

Maybe its just cause I have too much sense of self-worth but it can be kind of grating trying to relate with cliche protagonists like these who have no real ambitions or go on a internal monologue of how mediocre they think they are, even though their situation is better than most people's these days (such as having friends, a supporting family <both monetary and emotionally>, a job/education, etc)

Any feedback is appreciated! So, thank you for taking the time to provide a constructive critique.

About the mc, don't worry, he doesn't see himself as unworthy, nor he thinks he's having a bad life at all. Actually, he points out that he's happy in the very first seconds of the game. He just ran to some bad situations, like everyone in their life. Yet, as story continues, he will develop even better. It's already something I had planned, I think you will enjoy to see what's to come. But I understand you think this way! It's just a silly excuse for really fun scenes that will come soon~

Thanks for playing the game!

Text box on Android is too much left side of the screen and it is annoying to read 

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