Hey some feedback on the V3 English proofreading that was stated about before. Although it is not very hard to read it, it still looks like the proofreading was not done by a native English speaker or someone with a high level of English. A lot of grammar mistakes that are hard to overlook.
Regardless of that I do quite enjoy this game so I hope this issue can be resolved.
yes but dont worry, ren'py (the engine the game was made in) has a cloud based save method, all of the saved progress will stay even after you delete all of the files because it was saved in the same device/cloud, so all of your progress will be there even after you unistall/delete the game and its files
Does anyone know how i can change the version 2 5.5 GB version from zip to apk because when i download v2 its always a pc data package snd i absolutely waste 5GB and have to delete it tried to redownload it many times but same result
I'm assuming English isn't the first language, so I won't hate too much, but I highly recommend getting someone who speaks fluently to proofread. If you have a Discord maybe ask there, because the errors are very easily identifiable, and there are countless spelling/grammar mistakes. It's decipherable as an English speaker myself, but overall lowers the quality of the experience when I have to re-read thinking "wait, what the fuck?". Again, I don't want to hate since the story and gameplay were just fine, and the animations were great, but there definitely needs to be many fixes. Thanks for the hard work, and I'm excited for more content to come.
No worries! Thanks for playing the game and the review! Most of spelling mistakes were already fixed in the new version of the game. I got several proofreads, so everything should be better from now on.
I also wanted to ask about the filesize. It seems that for a game with around 1-2 hours of gameplay currently, and not many animations, we're seeing nearly 6GB of storage taken. This is absurdly high for the current amount of content, as other games that have been in development and have had hours upon hours on content take up less space. Is there any reason for this, and will it be optimized going forward? I'm asking because even though it takes that much space I was still having trouble loading all of the animations to their fullest extent, lagging quite a lot, getting like 3fps during moments like stretching at the park or pool, which makes me wonder if I'll be able to enjoy any of the actual sex scenes in the future. Thank you for your feedback, and again, I just want to see the game be better, I mean no disrespect.👍
Sorry to be that guy again but i downloaded both versions 1 and 2 for android and nothing changed in case of text being not readable by some degree im not trying to be mean or anything but would it be possible to either change the text size or make it readable sorry or sounding annoying have a nice day/night
Every time I try to download it it says network interrupted, and then after resuming the download it says forbidden. I've got plenty of storage, what's going on? I'm on Win and downloading the one for Win
update: I think I just have to do absolutely nothing other than sit, wait, and monitor the download. it got up to around 50 something percent which is the furthest its been since I began trying.
Encountered this error when trying to go to the "Retire" at the Outskirts iirc. Haven't tried continuing after that screen, only rollback. Windows version played on Linux.
Quite enjoyed this, had more content than I thought for being this early. I was just enjoying reading too much to even what you initially get the game for. Now THATS a mark of a good game xD
Note- There are a number of grammatical errors, whether or not they impact your experience playing may vary.
Try downloading Wine, an application that helps run .exe files for non Windows platforms. Make sure to download the Windows version of the game. f you already have wine, try running "wine 'insertname.exe'"
Do you know how to use a terminal to use this input?
Oh I'm so sorry to hear that! Technially it should be alright, I just select the Mac build version for it. Seems I'll have to keep investigating the problem. It's hard for me since I don't have Mac, sorry!
Your Mac build does work, but it's not notarized. Apple wants users to only trust Apple's App Store so when you open an unsigned application macOS acts like it's scary/broken/untrustworthy. You can force it to run anyway, and I left a comment in this thread with the steps.
If you want to make an app that "just works" on Macs, it needs to be notarized. RenpyTom has info about that here. https://patreon.renpy.org/macos-notarization.htmlUnfortunately that process needs a Mac. A not-notarized app is definitely better than no app though. Game runs great once you bypass the checks.
The Mac version does work, but it's not signed by Apple so you have to do a one-off security override to make it run. If you're not comfortable with that it's best to stop here, but I think it's fair to say the risk from a Renpy game is very low. YMMV.
The steps below will add an exception for the game executable to allow it to run. It doesn't disable any macOS security checks.
1) Try to open the game will say it can't because the developer isn't verified. Click "cancel", not "Move to bin".
2) Open system settings, and go to "Privacy and security". Scroll down and you will see a message that "AIRevolution was blocked because...". Click the "Open anyway" button.
3) macOS will ask for your fingerprint or password. Do this.
4) macOS will then once again ask if you want to open the game and warn you about security and malware. Click "Open", and the game will start.
This exception will be remembered so next time you open the game it will start normally without any warnings. When a new version comes out however, you will need to go through these steps again to add a fresh exception.
Try downloading Wine, an application that helps run .exe files for non Windows platforms. Make sure to download the Windows version of the game. If you already have wine, try running "wine 'insertname.exe'"
Do you know how to use a terminal to use this input?
Oh I'm so sorry to hear that! Technially it should be alright, I just select the Mac build version for it. Seems I'll have to keep investigating the problem. It's hard for me since I don't have Mac, sorry!
Listen, I don't like being negative, but there's a large amount of spelling/grammar mistakes. Also, some of the lines sound like they were written by a horny 13 year old. My honest opinion is that you should revise some of your dialogue to be more mature and appropriate. But this 13 year old has good taste. More Yuriko.
I appreciate every feeback, even negative things so don't worry! I got many help with text, now it should have far less spelling mistakes! There is more of Yuriko in the new version!
I played version 1 and it's very good, but I got to a point where I don't know what I have to do. Until now I got to the point where when talking to Akaime in his room he says "Wait for future updates" and I don't think I can do anything else. ____ Yuriko tells me about a "local" that "next time won't be forgotten" and I have an idea what to do.
Question. Is this game a demo or trial? Can I be able to play the full game without paying? Will I get the same contents the premium users get eventually but at a slower rate? If so then I'm fine with that. Please respond.
Yes, you're able to play this game without paying at all. The game is and will always be free. There isn't premium content. Supporters have other different rewards, the game earlier to play and special requests. They are the main reason I can keep developing the game.
Of course, I don't force anyone to support me. If you decide to play and enjoy my game, that makes me quite happy already!
oh that's so Great news. I'll play it. I would pay but I really don't have much cash on me. So playing is my only way if supporting. Also on android the text on the left side is cut off. Please fix it .
Every review is great, its just that the text is cut off and I can't really enjoy it properly. I'm on Android btw is this fixed some how or do I need to wait for a new update, the game looks amazing really wish to play it right.
I don't know if this is already planned for the next update, but you could add a different kind of text box for when a character is thinking about something, like a gray thought cloud or have the thought be in brackets for example (wow that's a cute outfit). Just thought that'd make it easier to understand when the characters are thinking about something or actually talking to another character. another thing could be to have someone proofread the dialogue so that it makes more sense, I get what the characters are trying to say but it would be nice to have it be grammatically correct so that its super easy to understand. And I'm sorry if this isn't helpful but keep up the good work!
Don't worry, I love the feeback! The different color for "thinking" can be a great idea, I'll think about it!
About the proof reader, that's already done. There are several people helping me, so you will notice the difference in next version of the game. Even for all the past content, will be fixed!
Oh, I have prepared something far better than a journal. You will see in next version of the game. Will have several helpfull stuff for the player. Thanks for playing it!
The game is very good and shows promise but please consider getting a proofreader because the English is very rough to the point of getting distracting at times.
I understand, no worries, I already got people who are actively helping me. You should notice a strong difference in next version of the game. Thanks for playing it and the feeback!
It's the second version, don't worry. Same as PC and the others. It just says version 1 cause it was the first version i released for android, but it's actually v0.2
Why is version 0.2 a .zip file and in the same file as all the other devices also why is 5GB I'm just curious but the first version was really good (even tho my tablet crashed like 7 times on 1 animation XD) but yea just wanted to say that and keep up the good work
it's good. many animations don't loop properly and translation is poor but overall it's a cute game. the fact that it's original and not just using characters from genshit or popular animes is a plus, also the fact that you went and piled up animations instead of just using poor quality AI generated images is a good move. i'm waiting for next updates :)
Thank you! Then I'm pretty sure you will love next version, which comes with really really nice animations, far better done, you will see. Thanks for playing the game!
I downloaded this game literally yesterday and fell in love with the game. I do have pros and cons, but what I will say is that the pros HEAVILY outweigh the cons.
Pros:
- The game characters are VERY well designed. Not only that, but their character development is excellent as well! Akaime not really getting along very well with Katsune in the first version of the game made sense, but seeing her kinda start to accept Katsune in the second as time goes on is evidence of that character development.
- The way you're setting up the big bad for this game is absolutely phenomenal, giving her a dream of proving AI is superior to humans, and making that a reality. And making sure she's not doing this as a solo mission was a great idea.
- The story so far is great! Sure, a little packed for two versions, but as time goes on, its only going to get better! So I can't complain whatsoever! Only two versions in and I'm biting my nails over the next update!
Cons:
- The spelling is a little off, but that is perfectly okay! I was still able to understand everything people were trying to say.
That's about it for me! I absolutely love this project and I can't wait to keep playing it in the future!
If you do want help with the spelling in the future, do let me know, I'd love to help you with that if you'd let me!
Hey! Thanks for the feedback! It was lovely to hear everything, that you enjoyed it so much! I really hope you enjoy what I have prepared for future versions.
The spelling will be fixed next version, don't worry. I had several help to correct all those mistakes, even future ones! But thanks either way, you're awesome!
surprisingly great art and animation, but the game felt like is was being railroaded into being a scumbag, and the grammar and spelling are all over the place, seems like english is the writer/dev's second language, which is fine but it needs someone to go over it. i will definitely follow the development.
Don't worry, I got already people helping me with the grammar, should be far better for future versions. And of course, everything fixed of past versions
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Great game, is pregnancy planned?
I don't think so
No plans for it so far, sorry.
No worries, I've enjoyed it thus far. I'll be watching your career with great interest!
is the picture with numbers in the background of your room a code for Zero? i've tried every combonation of numbers, but no codes :(
All the available codes are shown in my Discord Server. There is a channel called zero-codes. Hope it helps!
Hey some feedback on the V3 English proofreading that was stated about before. Although it is not very hard to read it, it still looks like the proofreading was not done by a native English speaker or someone with a high level of English. A lot of grammar mistakes that are hard to overlook.
Regardless of that I do quite enjoy this game so I hope this issue can be resolved.
Thank you! Yes of course, I solve as many errors as possible every new update. I'll work till every single grammar mistake is solved.
How do you turn win-zip into APK because I'm having difficulty
You don't need to. Just use the android version, it's an APK file. It's the same version than the rest, don't worry.
Como que transforma o win-zip para APK?
You don't need to. Just use the android version, it's an APK file. It's the same version than the rest, don't worry.
When I tried to update it said app not installed because it's conflicting with an existing package.
Do I have to uninstall the game?
yes but dont worry, ren'py (the engine the game was made in) has a cloud based save method, all of the saved progress will stay even after you delete all of the files because it was saved in the same device/cloud, so all of your progress will be there even after you unistall/delete the game and its files
Does anyone know how i can change the version 2 5.5 GB version from zip to apk because when i download v2 its always a pc data package snd i absolutely waste 5GB and have to delete it tried to redownload it many times but same result
I'm assuming English isn't the first language, so I won't hate too much, but I highly recommend getting someone who speaks fluently to proofread. If you have a Discord maybe ask there, because the errors are very easily identifiable, and there are countless spelling/grammar mistakes. It's decipherable as an English speaker myself, but overall lowers the quality of the experience when I have to re-read thinking "wait, what the fuck?". Again, I don't want to hate since the story and gameplay were just fine, and the animations were great, but there definitely needs to be many fixes. Thanks for the hard work, and I'm excited for more content to come.
No worries! Thanks for playing the game and the review!
Most of spelling mistakes were already fixed in the new version of the game. I got several proofreads, so everything should be better from now on.
I also wanted to ask about the filesize. It seems that for a game with around 1-2 hours of gameplay currently, and not many animations, we're seeing nearly 6GB of storage taken. This is absurdly high for the current amount of content, as other games that have been in development and have had hours upon hours on content take up less space. Is there any reason for this, and will it be optimized going forward? I'm asking because even though it takes that much space I was still having trouble loading all of the animations to their fullest extent, lagging quite a lot, getting like 3fps during moments like stretching at the park or pool, which makes me wonder if I'll be able to enjoy any of the actual sex scenes in the future. Thank you for your feedback, and again, I just want to see the game be better, I mean no disrespect.👍
Sorry to be that guy again but i downloaded both versions 1 and 2 for android and nothing changed in case of text being not readable by some degree im not trying to be mean or anything but would it be possible to either change the text size or make it readable sorry or sounding annoying have a nice day/night
Thanks for playing the game!
Text problem is fixed on new version already c:
Every time I try to download it it says network interrupted, and then after resuming the download it says forbidden. I've got plenty of storage, what's going on? I'm on Win and downloading the one for Win
update: I think I just have to do absolutely nothing other than sit, wait, and monitor the download. it got up to around 50 something percent which is the furthest its been since I began trying.
second update: its done downloading, finally I can try it
Alguém sabe quando vai sair a versão v0.3?
I have just released on Patreon.
Here in Itch.io for free on 15th of this month.
Some probably already have this problem but for android part of the text isnt readable because its too far on the left hope this gets fixed
Fixed on new version already c:
the only bad thing really so far is that the text box doesnt fit on the screen on android
Fixed on new version already c:
Encountered this error when trying to go to the "Retire" at the Outskirts iirc. Haven't tried continuing after that screen, only rollback. Windows version played on Linux.
Fixed on new version already c:
Quite enjoyed this, had more content than I thought for being this early. I was just enjoying reading too much to even what you initially get the game for. Now THATS a mark of a good game xD
Note- There are a number of grammatical errors, whether or not they impact your experience playing may vary.
Thanks for the feeback! I corrected many many grammatical errors already c:
Would like to play, but the Mac game file doesn't work
Try downloading Wine, an application that helps run .exe files for non Windows platforms. Make sure to download the Windows version of the game. f you already have wine, try running "wine 'insertname.exe'"
Do you know how to use a terminal to use this input?
Oh I'm so sorry to hear that! Technially it should be alright, I just select the Mac build version for it. Seems I'll have to keep investigating the problem. It's hard for me since I don't have Mac, sorry!
Your Mac build does work, but it's not notarized. Apple wants users to only trust Apple's App Store so when you open an unsigned application macOS acts like it's scary/broken/untrustworthy. You can force it to run anyway, and I left a comment in this thread with the steps.
If you want to make an app that "just works" on Macs, it needs to be notarized. RenpyTom has info about that here. https://patreon.renpy.org/macos-notarization.htmlUnfortunately that process needs a Mac. A not-notarized app is definitely better than no app though. Game runs great once you bypass the checks.
Oh and I really like the game too BTW. Nice work!
The Mac version does work, but it's not signed by Apple so you have to do a one-off security override to make it run. If you're not comfortable with that it's best to stop here, but I think it's fair to say the risk from a Renpy game is very low. YMMV.
The steps below will add an exception for the game executable to allow it to run. It doesn't disable any macOS security checks.
1) Try to open the game will say it can't because the developer isn't verified. Click "cancel", not "Move to bin".
2) Open system settings, and go to "Privacy and security". Scroll down and you will see a message that "AIRevolution was blocked because...". Click the "Open anyway" button.
3) macOS will ask for your fingerprint or password. Do this.
4) macOS will then once again ask if you want to open the game and warn you about security and malware. Click "Open", and the game will start.
This exception will be remembered so next time you open the game it will start normally without any warnings. When a new version comes out however, you will need to go through these steps again to add a fresh exception.
hi impossible to open the app as soon as I launch the game it quits directly I'm on mac for info
Thank you for your reply
Try downloading Wine, an application that helps run .exe files for non Windows platforms. Make sure to download the Windows version of the game. If you already have wine, try running "wine 'insertname.exe'"
Do you know how to use a terminal to use this input?
Oh I'm so sorry to hear that! Technially it should be alright, I just select the Mac build version for it. Seems I'll have to keep investigating the problem. It's hard for me since I don't have Mac, sorry!
Can you fix in android the teks not in the middle but the game is good actually
Fixed on new version already c:
Will there be a possibility of adding the Spanish language?
So far, not yet. Comes with a lot of trouble that I may not be able to deal in the future.
Ai Revolution 🚫
Air evolution ✔️
The text is not on the middle
Fixed on new version already c:
this game is honestly so good i would prefer this with v0.2 over harem hotel with the latest version
Thank you for your feedback!
when is the next version coming out?
I have just released on Patreon.
Here in Itch.io for free on 15th of this month.
Are there any sex scenes if so how to I get them?
There is a secret scene that you may be interested. In my discord channel you can check all the codes for it.
Listen, I don't like being negative, but there's a large amount of spelling/grammar mistakes. Also, some of the lines sound like they were written by a horny 13 year old. My honest opinion is that you should revise some of your dialogue to be more mature and appropriate. But this 13 year old has good taste. More Yuriko.
more yuriko indeed.
Done!
I appreciate every feeback, even negative things so don't worry! I got many help with text, now it should have far less spelling mistakes! There is more of Yuriko in the new version!
I played version 1 and it's very good, but I got to a point where I don't know what I have to do. Until now I got to the point where when talking to Akaime in his room he says "Wait for future updates" and I don't think I can do anything else. ____ Yuriko tells me about a "local" that "next time won't be forgotten" and I have an idea what to do.
You won't have that problem from now on. There is a new feature that helps tracking characters progress and story c:
Is there a place where you post the progress of the new updates? Like, "Version 3 is 70% done" or sneak peeks of the characters/new settings?
Also, really like what you have going with the game so far! Keep up the good work!
Thank you for the feeback! In the discord official server you can check anything you wish.
New version has just been released on Patreon.
Next one will be just one month later!
On the android version, you can't see the full text box, is there a fix for this?
Fixed on new version already c:
Question. Is this game a demo or trial? Can I be able to play the full game without paying? Will I get the same contents the premium users get eventually but at a slower rate? If so then I'm fine with that. Please respond.
Yes, you're able to play this game without paying at all. The game is and will always be free. There isn't premium content.
Supporters have other different rewards, the game earlier to play and special requests. They are the main reason I can keep developing the game.
Of course, I don't force anyone to support me. If you decide to play and enjoy my game, that makes me quite happy already!
oh that's so Great news. I'll play it. I would pay but I really don't have much cash on me. So playing is my only way if supporting. Also on android the text on the left side is cut off. Please fix it .
Every review is great, its just that the text is cut off and I can't really enjoy it properly. I'm on Android btw is this fixed some how or do I need to wait for a new update, the game looks amazing really wish to play it right.
Yeah, I'm sorry about the android part. Yet, I'll do my best for next version to get this fixed! Thanks for your feeback tho!
I don't know if this is already planned for the next update, but you could add a different kind of text box for when a character is thinking about something, like a gray thought cloud or have the thought be in brackets for example (wow that's a cute outfit). Just thought that'd make it easier to understand when the characters are thinking about something or actually talking to another character. another thing could be to have someone proofread the dialogue so that it makes more sense, I get what the characters are trying to say but it would be nice to have it be grammatically correct so that its super easy to understand. And I'm sorry if this isn't helpful but keep up the good work!
Don't worry, I love the feeback! The different color for "thinking" can be a great idea, I'll think about it!
About the proof reader, that's already done. There are several people helping me, so you will notice the difference in next version of the game. Even for all the past content, will be fixed!
Thanks for playing the game!
glad I could be of help and I can't wait for the update, keep up the good work!!
The Android zip for version 2 doesn't work, literally. You can download it but you cannot install the game, idk how maybe use apk?
If you download the android version literally here, you will notice is an apk file, not .zip. Also it works, check it
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Really good , but consider adding a journal where you can see tasks and progress.
Oh, I have prepared something far better than a journal. You will see in next version of the game. Will have several helpfull stuff for the player. Thanks for playing it!
The game is very good and shows promise but please consider getting a proofreader because the English is very rough to the point of getting distracting at times.
I understand, no worries, I already got people who are actively helping me. You should notice a strong difference in next version of the game. Thanks for playing it and the feeback!
There's no version 2 for Android?
It's the second version, don't worry. Same as PC and the others. It just says version 1 cause it was the first version i released for android, but it's actually v0.2
Is there a update for android by chance
Yes, i will as soon as possible, once I fixed the annoying bug of the text
Why is version 0.2 a .zip file and in the same file as all the other devices also why is 5GB I'm just curious but the first version was really good (even tho my tablet crashed like 7 times on 1 animation XD) but yea just wanted to say that and keep up the good work
Pics and animations overall were quite heavy, but I'm working on it so will consume less resources. Thanks for the feedback and playing the game!
it's good.
many animations don't loop properly and translation is poor but overall it's a cute game. the fact that it's original and not just using characters from genshit or popular animes is a plus, also the fact that you went and piled up animations instead of just using poor quality AI generated images is a good move. i'm waiting for next updates :)
Thank you! Then I'm pretty sure you will love next version, which comes with really really nice animations, far better done, you will see. Thanks for playing the game!
I need to make it known.
I LOVE THIS GAME!
I downloaded this game literally yesterday and fell in love with the game. I do have pros and cons, but what I will say is that the pros HEAVILY outweigh the cons.
Pros:
- The game characters are VERY well designed. Not only that, but their character development is excellent as well! Akaime not really getting along very well with Katsune in the first version of the game made sense, but seeing her kinda start to accept Katsune in the second as time goes on is evidence of that character development.
- The way you're setting up the big bad for this game is absolutely phenomenal, giving her a dream of proving AI is superior to humans, and making that a reality. And making sure she's not doing this as a solo mission was a great idea.
- The story so far is great! Sure, a little packed for two versions, but as time goes on, its only going to get better! So I can't complain whatsoever! Only two versions in and I'm biting my nails over the next update!
Cons:
- The spelling is a little off, but that is perfectly okay! I was still able to understand everything people were trying to say.
That's about it for me! I absolutely love this project and I can't wait to keep playing it in the future!
If you do want help with the spelling in the future, do let me know, I'd love to help you with that if you'd let me!
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Hey! Thanks for the feedback! It was lovely to hear everything, that you enjoyed it so much! I really hope you enjoy what I have prepared for future versions.
The spelling will be fixed next version, don't worry. I had several help to correct all those mistakes, even future ones! But thanks either way, you're awesome!
surprisingly great art and animation, but the game felt like is was being railroaded into being a scumbag, and the grammar and spelling are all over the place, seems like english is the writer/dev's second language, which is fine but it needs someone to go over it. i will definitely follow the development.
Don't worry, I got already people helping me with the grammar, should be far better for future versions. And of course, everything fixed of past versions