Hi dev, I don't see any comments about planned tags, it would be great if you could put a list in the description (I prefer to know in advance what type of content to expect, to know if it's worth it or not), for example are kinks/fetishes avoidables (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
In previous comments I see that someone asked about ntr and you didn't have a clear answer, is this still the case? If so, what type of ntr would you be talking about, netorare, netori, netorase?
As for the tags, I can't assure 100% since pretty much everything is quite open so far, with some limitations of course. But you can expect many types of sex scenes in the future. First, will need more build up to make things more interesting than just sex with some strangers.
Any nsfw scene will be of course skippable, the player will have completly freedom to do or not such scenes. They won't be forced upon player against their will.
As for NRT, I said I don't know yet if I'll add it. I may in the future but not sure. Netorare and netori is probable. Netorase almost sure will be involved (In case the player decide so)
Played plenty, and I mean plenty of visual novels. Finished the current version and I have to say, quite interesting.
So here's my take: - The story is quite unique, some feedback I would give here and there. But, even so, the character design and development put in this game, specially for the current state it's in, is incredible.
- Time passed by quick while playing the game, which is a feeling I don't quite get anymore. And, honestly, it leaves you craving for more. Quite excited for the next update!
- I've noticed a few grammar mistakes but meh, little bit of patching up and it's as good as new. If there is any intent of making the game into various languages as development goes further on, I would love to volunteer. (I'm fluent with English and Portuguese) If there's any issue with programming I wouldn't mind having a look at it either. (not saying I'm the best programmer out there though)
- The potential this game holds is quite amazing. You can tell the characters are well thought through. The personalities made for the AIgirls seem dynamic to me, in a way as if they stand out more than the supposed typical human girl (for example, the childhood friend present in the game).
-The story, (I know I'm repeating myself here, but listen:) it's quite mesmerizing. It doesn't feel like those typical cliché-ish storylines that, in all my honesty, bore me to death.
Keep up the great work! Really looking forward towards the future of AIRevolution!
Such a wonderful feedback! I feel honored! Even more comming from someone who has played that many VN games. Thank you for your lovely words! I really really appeciate it so much!
Don't worry, the grammar mistakes are fixed already. At least the ones of this first version, you will notice in the new one.
I still need to ponder about other languages option. Programming isn't a problem for me so far, luckily! Thanks for the offer notheless!
I have so much planned for the story and characters and I hope the new content will keep up with your expectations, personally I think will be really good.
If you ever wish to suggest anything, feel free to join my discord server, I'll glady listen you!
I'm flattered, but most of all, absolutely honored to receive feedback from a wonderful creator and an almighty god level programmer! (picturing "i use arch btw" coming from ya)
'Nough said though, I'm most definitely looking forward to it, I have no doubts in your abilities to blast this game into a AAA title.
Regarding suggestions, my brain runs low by the time I get any free time, but if somehow a miracle happens and I use my brain (which is quite rare) I'll leave it in the discord server, or in the itch.io comment section. (gonna be honest here though, completely forgot the initial suggestions I had come up with, from my first gameplay)
Ah, forgot to mention I joined the discord as soon as I had finished the game :)
Damn, I didn't see the time pass, when I reached the end of the version I was like "Wait. NO I wan't to continue !". Amazing works ! I like the universe, the character designs and well basically everything so far from the little I was able to experience.
Forum users will add your game there anyway, keep in mind. They write all the information you provide here. If you want, show up there and manage your game page yourself.
At least that's what happened to my game. I went there about a month after the release here to make a page on their forum, but my game has already been there for a month.
I'm playing this with joiplay because i don't have pc or laptop,usually it works because this games made with renpy but it doesn't,i can put the game on joiplay but when i press it to play it just give a few seconds of black sreen and then put me back into game selection of joiplay.
Can't say for sure, it's way too early and I plan to keep up with this project for a very long time. But I can tell you already, I didn't have plans for it yet. So, answer is no, so far.
alright good to know and if you do decide to add NTR pls make it so we can avoid it would really appreciate it, oh and the game was great keep up the good work :)
bro i just downloaded it and i already have to pause cause the FAI or SAI question cause Im evenly split 2/3 say slave (kinky + logic) and 2/3 say free(logic + emotion) how is it already an instant struggle what am i to do
Hmmmm, I'd suggest you to choose the one you feel more confortable with. If you enjoy both options, you can always have two different saves. Thanks for playing it!
amazing so far, while there are quite a few spelling/grammatical mistakes it's not so bad that the game loses it's quality, I definitely see a lot of potential in this game, keep up the good work.
Thank you! I'll make sure to keep up, working already quite hard for next one.
Did I have some mistakes? Feel free to join my discord server, there is a channel where you or anyone else can post any spelling/gramatical errors. If you type them there, I'll fix them asap, thanks!
This is incredible so far! Problem for me is that the animated scenes were laggy (potato pc I know) but maybe if its not too hard to implement have an option to switch off the animated scenes to just have standard CG art instead, I love everything about this so far AND Akaime is Best Girl, Thanks :)
Yes! Definitely. Didn't released yet cause I wanted to test it, making sure everything looked fine without anything weird. As soon as I prepare all, I'll have an Adroid Version each new version.
Just finished the game, This is on track to be a AMAZING game, has a good story,great characters, and a great plot. Just wondering are u in the making of a update?
Quite happy you enjoyed the game so far! Thanks! Yes, I'll release a new version of the game every month. On 15th for free, here in itch.io for everyone. Two weeks earlier for my lovely patrons. Join my discord for more information, I have a FAQ there
Thanks for playing it. Glad you enjoyed the game so far!
Akaime? She has been using same hairstyle the whole version. Maybe you meant Katsue, the cat-girl. Don't worry, she changes her hairstyle between outfits. You will get to see her with both.
alright so I finished playing the game and went through every dialogue option available so heres a review and how I think this game can go from good to top tier.
The story so far is a bit fast paced. for some people thats great, for people like me, I like a slower paced story. Especially after the cat girl was introduced, the nsfw content really picked up. in about 15 minute's of gametime we went from lewd to nude. imo it could be better paced out. Also the beginning is kinda meh, The bully is just kinda there, I think it would be better suited if instead of being harsh and abusive, they instead work to isolate you from others, that would better bring out the idea that the MC is lonely, and the cat girl can improve his traits and the main girl can help bring out his personality
Nsfw scenes are pretty good but as I already stated are a little fast paced. I know you have to deliver something to the fans, but I feel like if you better worked on the campy and light hearted but fun dialogue, you could get away with stretching scene out a bit. But of course maybe add repeatable scenes like peaking the shower in the morning. The one thing that I can really say for sure is please do not add penetration sex so early. A lot of games that do it early make it feel really shoehorned in and make the girls feel like objects. Instead slowly work up to it like in games such as once in a lifetime.
"dialogue options" look I get it, its a VN, theres only so much you can do, but I feel like youre on the right track, just missing a few things. For example when you first go to wake up the main girl, you can either knock or enter. the best route I found was to knock, then enter, then wisper in her ear. Variety like this didnt exist in much of the other options, so I do hope in the future different dialogue can take you on vastly different paths in an interactions with a character. If theres one thing people hate, its the illusion of choice.
Overall youre sitting on a good game with the potential to have this become one of the better known VNs, it imo just needs a slower pacing with more dialogue route variety which it seems you intend to add. right now this is a solid 7/10
First of all, thanks for playing the game, take your time to do such an extensive review, advices and positive feedback, even the "weak" points.
I consider myself honest person and I know there are always so much to improve so I'm okey and willing to make the game as better as possible, fixing anything wrong/poor developed.
The story needed to be bit paced in the beginning, in my opinion, cause I think player should somewhat get a solid idea of what's the main story about. Since it's a prologue, I tried to provide as much situations as possible to lightly show players what's ahead. Without go too far of course.
I'm aware quick nsfw stuff would break the "magic", so I kept it spicy in this early stage. Story or nsfw won't quick peace so don't worry. About spicy/nude, it completly depends of the characters, pace changes between them by their personalities.
In my discord channel we can discuss as much as you'd like from the game, easier. I'd love to keep having your feedback and I hope you can notice an improvement in future versions.
before i dive head first into this i gotta know, is there futa or ntr. love futa ok with ntr and im good with vanilla if thats what this is, i just prefer to know what im getting into before i play something
Genuinely one of the best NSFW games i've played, it has so much character and potential and I'm so excited I can follow the journey and see how this game evolves <
The same way I'm super excited to release new content! I have so much material prepared. With time and your support, I'll make sure to make this real, thanks!
loved the work so far excited to see what's to come, my only man point of criticism is to maybe include a lower graphics option if possible since there's some people like me with weak ass PCs xD
Even though those high quality graphics are amazing so if a quality setting does get added that would be so cool since I don't want you to have to artistically cut corners with the character designs they're so awesome TvT
hello i fnished your game and enjoyed it , but there is 2 things i wanna say 1-putting rezero MC as some thug made me laugh so hard i almost choked 2-i know this game is mostly 18 but i'd enjoy it more if some characters are not just erotic like 1 or 2 normal cute romance character with out nsfw stuff just saying, it's alright if you don't want to but anyway i enjoyed your game (:
To be honest, I had no idea that male was even 'known', it was just a random male I got, which I think was quite fitting for the scene hehe Still, changed it a bit! I mean, that's depends of your ingame decisions, you can avoid most nsfw stuff technically if you wish so I'm happy you enjoyed the game so far, thanks!
I really love it. This project got my attention because of a character in an anime i really like that Akaime really looks kind of alike. It´s Yui Yashiya from Rokudo's Bad Girls. Fav Character Akaime
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Hi dev, I don't see any comments about planned tags, it would be great if you could put a list in the description (I prefer to know in advance what type of content to expect, to know if it's worth it or not), for example are kinks/fetishes avoidables (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
In previous comments I see that someone asked about ntr and you didn't have a clear answer, is this still the case? If so, what type of ntr would you be talking about, netorare, netori, netorase?
Thanks, good luck.
Hello! Thanks for playing my game!
As for the tags, I can't assure 100% since pretty much everything is quite open so far, with some limitations of course. But you can expect many types of sex scenes in the future. First, will need more build up to make things more interesting than just sex with some strangers.
Any nsfw scene will be of course skippable, the player will have completly freedom to do or not such scenes. They won't be forced upon player against their will.
As for NRT, I said I don't know yet if I'll add it. I may in the future but not sure. Netorare and netori is probable. Netorase almost sure will be involved (In case the player decide so)
really good game. but there are a lot of spelling mistakes and some sentences sound weird therefor making them hard to read.
though if we put that aside this is a really good game
Don't worry, all of those mistakes are fixed for next version. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for playing it!
I really enjoyed this, and i love the plot its so cool!
Awwh! Thank you so much! It's nice to see you loved it.
Cant wait for the next update!
Played plenty, and I mean plenty of visual novels.
Finished the current version and I have to say, quite interesting.
So here's my take:
- The story is quite unique, some feedback I would give here and there. But, even so, the character design and development put in this game, specially for the current state it's in, is incredible.
- Time passed by quick while playing the game, which is a feeling I don't quite get anymore. And, honestly, it leaves you craving for more. Quite excited for the next update!
- I've noticed a few grammar mistakes but meh, little bit of patching up and it's as good as new. If there is any intent of making the game into various languages as development goes further on, I would love to volunteer. (I'm fluent with English and Portuguese)
If there's any issue with programming I wouldn't mind having a look at it either. (not saying I'm the best programmer out there though)
- The potential this game holds is quite amazing.
You can tell the characters are well thought through. The personalities made for the AIgirls seem dynamic to me, in a way as if they stand out more than the supposed typical human girl (for example, the childhood friend present in the game).
-The story, (I know I'm repeating myself here, but listen:) it's quite mesmerizing. It doesn't feel like those typical cliché-ish storylines that, in all my honesty, bore me
to death.Keep up the great work!
Really looking forward towards the future of AIRevolution!
Such a wonderful feedback! I feel honored! Even more comming from someone who has played that many VN games. Thank you for your lovely words! I really really appeciate it so much!
Don't worry, the grammar mistakes are fixed already. At least the ones of this first version, you will notice in the new one.
I still need to ponder about other languages option. Programming isn't a problem for me so far, luckily! Thanks for the offer notheless!
I have so much planned for the story and characters and I hope the new content will keep up with your expectations, personally I think will be really good.
If you ever wish to suggest anything, feel free to join my discord server, I'll glady listen you!
Aw shucksss...
I'm flattered, but most of all, absolutely honored to receive feedback from a wonderful creator and an almighty god level programmer! (picturing "i use arch btw" coming from ya)
'Nough said though, I'm most definitely looking forward to it, I have no doubts in your abilities to blast this game into a AAA title.
Regarding suggestions, my brain runs low by the time I get any free time, but if somehow a miracle happens and I use my brain (which is quite rare) I'll leave it in the discord server, or in the itch.io comment section.
(gonna be honest here though, completely forgot the initial suggestions I had come up with, from my first gameplay)
Ah, forgot to mention I joined the discord as soon as I had finished the game :)
Keep up the great work!
What's the name of the song at the main menu when you open the game, because man it's SO good bro
The song name is "Tokoyami no Keiyaku". Thank you! I love it so much aswell.
Damn, I didn't see the time pass, when I reached the end of the version I was like "Wait. NO I wan't to continue !". Amazing works ! I like the universe, the character designs and well basically everything so far from the little I was able to experience.
Loved to know you enjoyed it that much! There is much more comming soon, thank you for the feedback, really appreciated!
do you have the game on f95zone?if yes can i get the link
I don't have the game there, sorry
Forum users will add your game there anyway, keep in mind. They write all the information you provide here. If you want, show up there and manage your game page yourself.
At least that's what happened to my game. I went there about a month after the release here to make a page on their forum, but my game has already been there for a month.
Yeah u got a good point.better to manage it herself than some rando
Game looks really really good. Can't wait to see more of it!
Thank you! I really appreciate your comment!
You're welcome! Any idea when we can expect the next update?
Join the discord server, you can see most information there . Right now updates will probably come out evry 2 months.
Thank you sir!
So far, everything is good, but I recommend fixing the writing/spelling. Other than that, you're doing great.
Thank you! They are already fixed, you will notice in the next update
Well paced, solid writing, great art style/animation. Cant wait for update
Thanks for playing it! Will make a post as soon as it available
this going to be the first time i'm interested in both the plot and the scenes
Wow! I'm so happy this game is the exception for you!
Curious
Hole Mole this game is so fucking good and looks super promising cant wait anything else but great things from you and the dialogue is funny as fuck x
Wow! Glad you like it that much! I'm so happy to hear that, thank so you so much!
Tried the game out, really enjoy v1! Excited to see what's to come
Great news! Hope you enjoy next updates aswell.
I'm playing this with joiplay because i don't have pc or laptop,usually it works because this games made with renpy but it doesn't,i can put the game on joiplay but when i press it to play it just give a few seconds of black sreen and then put me back into game selection of joiplay.
Here's the sreenshot of traceback.txt:
If anyone know how to fix this please reply
I mean, that must be cause the only version available is for Windows/Linux. Once I release the android version shouldn't have those problems.
Thanks for the explanation,you can take your time with this i can wait
Will there be a mac edition?
Yes, as soon as I can test everything works perfectly I'll release it.
Game has potential, I like it. Definitely needs help with spelling and grammar but overall it was a fun experience.
Also, will future updates utilize our saves?
Happy you enjoyed it so far!
Don't worry, already fixed all all/most of grammar mistakes.
Yes, you should keep your saves for future versions.
Game is really fin great
Hope to see more of it soon
also, will it be only avaible as how the game is or will there be a sandbox ver
Thank you so much!
To answer your question, I've recently posted game news about next update in my Patreon. I've the feeling you will like it~
*cries in non-patreon supporter* I've recently found the game, and i got high hopes that dis' will be really good
The game got a really big potential!
Can't wait to see future updates :)
Glad you think this way. Hope you enjoy future versions aswell!
Any plans for Android?
(tried playing this using Joiplay, and it crashes it on-load lol)
Of course, I'll work on it asap and release an android version, don't worry
pls tell me that you won't be adding NTR to this game?
Can't say for sure, it's way too early and I plan to keep up with this project for a very long time. But I can tell you already, I didn't have plans for it yet. So, answer is no, so far.
alright good to know and if you do decide to add NTR pls make it so we can avoid it would really appreciate it, oh and the game was great keep up the good work :)
Noted! Thanks, glad you're enjoying it
bro i just downloaded it and i already have to pause cause the FAI or SAI question cause Im evenly split 2/3 say slave (kinky + logic) and 2/3 say free(logic + emotion) how is it already an instant struggle what am i to do
Hmmmm, I'd suggest you to choose the one you feel more confortable with. If you enjoy both options, you can always have two different saves. Thanks for playing it!
wow this gonna be the next Fortnite I guarantee.
Hahahaha, thanks for your positive words! If you enjoyed it, that makes me quite happy already.
amazing so far, while there are quite a few spelling/grammatical mistakes it's not so bad that the game loses it's quality, I definitely see a lot of potential in this game, keep up the good work.
Thank you! I'll make sure to keep up, working already quite hard for next one.
Did I have some mistakes? Feel free to join my discord server, there is a channel where you or anyone else can post any spelling/gramatical errors. If you type them there, I'll fix them asap, thanks!
This is incredible so far! Problem for me is that the animated scenes were laggy (potato pc I know) but maybe if its not too hard to implement have an option to switch off the animated scenes to just have standard CG art instead, I love everything about this so far AND Akaime is Best Girl, Thanks :)
Thank you so much! Really happy you loved it! I'm trying to figure out how to do it already, don't worry
How about MacOS? :(
Please...
Yes, I'll work on that version aswell. Will release it once I make sure everything works properly
Thank you very much! I love you!
2 hour lego bionicle lore.
Thanks for playing the game tho! Hope you like more future versions
the games look amazing but im wondering will there be an Android version?
Yes! Definitely. Didn't released yet cause I wanted to test it, making sure everything looked fine without anything weird. As soon as I prepare all, I'll have an Adroid Version each new version.
Thanks for playing AIRevolution!
perfect, looking forward to it, keep up the good work and do your best
Just finished the game, This is on track to be a AMAZING game, has a good story,great characters, and a great plot. Just wondering are u in the making of a update?
Or is it on patrion
Quite happy you enjoyed the game so far! Thanks!
Yes, I'll release a new version of the game every month.
On 15th for free, here in itch.io for everyone.
Two weeks earlier for my lovely patrons.
Join my discord for more information, I have a FAQ there
Very good game so far just needs more content and PLEASE add an option to add Akaimes old hair back
Thanks for playing it. Glad you enjoyed the game so far!
Akaime? She has been using same hairstyle the whole version. Maybe you meant Katsue, the cat-girl. Don't worry, she changes her hairstyle between outfits. You will get to see her with both.
alright so I finished playing the game and went through every dialogue option available so heres a review and how I think this game can go from good to top tier.
The story so far is a bit fast paced. for some people thats great, for people like me, I like a slower paced story. Especially after the cat girl was introduced, the nsfw content really picked up. in about 15 minute's of gametime we went from lewd to nude. imo it could be better paced out. Also the beginning is kinda meh, The bully is just kinda there, I think it would be better suited if instead of being harsh and abusive, they instead work to isolate you from others, that would better bring out the idea that the MC is lonely, and the cat girl can improve his traits and the main girl can help bring out his personality
Nsfw scenes are pretty good but as I already stated are a little fast paced. I know you have to deliver something to the fans, but I feel like if you better worked on the campy and light hearted but fun dialogue, you could get away with stretching scene out a bit. But of course maybe add repeatable scenes like peaking the shower in the morning. The one thing that I can really say for sure is please do not add penetration sex so early. A lot of games that do it early make it feel really shoehorned in and make the girls feel like objects. Instead slowly work up to it like in games such as once in a lifetime.
"dialogue options" look I get it, its a VN, theres only so much you can do, but I feel like youre on the right track, just missing a few things. For example when you first go to wake up the main girl, you can either knock or enter. the best route I found was to knock, then enter, then wisper in her ear. Variety like this didnt exist in much of the other options, so I do hope in the future different dialogue can take you on vastly different paths in an interactions with a character. If theres one thing people hate, its the illusion of choice.
Overall youre sitting on a good game with the potential to have this become one of the better known VNs, it imo just needs a slower pacing with more dialogue route variety which it seems you intend to add. right now this is a solid 7/10
First of all, thanks for playing the game, take your time to do such an extensive review, advices and positive feedback, even the "weak" points.
I consider myself honest person and I know there are always so much to improve so I'm okey and willing to make the game as better as possible, fixing anything wrong/poor developed.
The story needed to be bit paced in the beginning, in my opinion, cause I think player should somewhat get a solid idea of what's the main story about. Since it's a prologue, I tried to provide as much situations as possible to lightly show players what's ahead. Without go too far of course.
I'm aware quick nsfw stuff would break the "magic", so I kept it spicy in this early stage. Story or nsfw won't quick peace so don't worry. About spicy/nude, it completly depends of the characters, pace changes between them by their personalities.
In my discord channel we can discuss as much as you'd like from the game, easier. I'd love to keep having your feedback and I hope you can notice an improvement in future versions.
before i dive head first into this i gotta know, is there futa or ntr. love futa ok with ntr and im good with vanilla if thats what this is, i just prefer to know what im getting into before i play something
Neither of those so far. Not sure in the future
Genuinely one of the best NSFW games i've played, it has so much character and potential and I'm so excited I can follow the journey and see how this game evolves <
The same way I'm super excited to release new content! I have so much material prepared. With time and your support, I'll make sure to make this real, thanks!
I'll be waiting for each release best of luck <333
hand down the best nsfw game ive played
Thanks for playing it tho! Nsfw will become far better future versions, it was just a prologue
loved the work so far excited to see what's to come, my only man point of criticism is to maybe include a lower graphics option if possible since there's some people like me with weak ass PCs xD
Thanks, really! I'll invest time to study that. A way to add an option with lowers graphics. However, I'll keep high quality for whoever can bear it
Even though those high quality graphics are amazing so if a quality setting does get added that would be so cool since I don't want you to have to artistically cut corners with the character designs they're so awesome TvT
I can't wait for more content. Good start btw.
Every month, new content. I'm working hard to keep up the quality, don't worry. Thanks for the feedback!
very cool
No, you're very cool! Thanks for playing it
hello i fnished your game and enjoyed it , but there is 2 things i wanna say
1-putting rezero MC as some thug made me laugh so hard i almost choked
2-i know this game is mostly 18 but i'd enjoy it more if some characters are not just erotic like 1 or 2 normal cute romance character with out nsfw stuff
just saying, it's alright if you don't want to but anyway i enjoyed your game (:
To be honest, I had no idea that male was even 'known', it was just a random male I got, which I think was quite fitting for the scene hehe Still, changed it a bit!
I mean, that's depends of your ingame decisions, you can avoid most nsfw stuff technically if you wish so
I'm happy you enjoyed the game so far, thanks!
nice work
Gad you enjoyed it! Thanks
I really love it. This project got my attention because of a character in an anime i really like that Akaime really looks kind of alike. It´s Yui Yashiya from Rokudo's Bad Girls. Fav Character Akaime
Oh! Akaime's secret sister? Cool! hahaha