You wont believe how many people like this ive seen in dc servers begging for the creators to add pregnancy or cumflation content, I really dont understand what pleasure it gives them to know the person they are fucking has a fucking child in them
Really enjoying the direction this is going so far. I did however want to mention that the writing seems to go from a smooth translation in the earlier content, into a more "machine translation" feel in the later story. Some of it comes across as awkwardly worded and is an issue that's common when translating content to English but not editing the phrasing/sentence structure to be proper English. Honestly not too hard to fix with a bit of proof reading or a fan translator to help rearrange some wording here and there. Anyways really good job so far with the story and plot setup, looking forward to future releases and seeing where it goes.
Ok. The AVN looked interesting, like many others here looked interesting. I figured I'd give it a shot. And... I barely got past the prologue before feeling like I had to just... put it aside. I realize that this isn't "fair"... so I am going to try again. But the storytelling is just off... wrong.
I'm not talking about the story idea, AI constructs in human-like bodies that are essentially a new/better form of human wanting to create a revolution. I'm talking about the execution of that concept. Alright. The MC was left alone by his parents, and is bullied, so he keeps to himself. Even his oldest friend, isn't really a friend. Sure, she is pleasant, but when he reaches out to her for inclusion, all she can do is fob him off on other people *SHE* doesn't want to be friends with. When her friends arbitrarily decide not to include him, she doesn't stand up for him. His parents buy him an AIGirl out of guilt because they aren't there for him, and now he has to deal with bullying in his own home. He doesn't even have the option to hold this AIGirl responsible for the way she acts, and the ONLY option is to have a good time watching a movie with her, while she teases him just to make him uncomfortable. The MC is one who apparently enjoys his own company, rather than face a continued stream of rejection... and he doesn't even have that anymore to retreat to. And for us, to enjoy any of the adult content, we have to make choices that are completely OUT of character, for the character we are given to play.
He meets and "saves" another AIGirl who gets injected in his life, who appears to be the polar opposite of the one purchased for him. When she expresses desires for the MC, our "legitimate" first AIGirl only bullies the MC further... not out of actual jealousy, but out of a sense of control.
He meets the rule-breaker in class, talks out of class, is told that she is interested in him playing drums with her band, and then tells him he needs to compete with someone else for the chance. The character, as has been detailed up to this point, would simply reject himself rather than audition and face this new perceived humiliation. Everything up to this point just says he would completely believe in a "Why bother trying, I should just play more games" attitude.
As an experiment, I progressed several weeks into the game, simply showering and going to class, going home, playing games and sleeping. Not one AIGirl ever called/contacted him. There was no concern. After telling the maid what her duties were, that was it. No random scenes involving meals when he got home, no random conversations asking about how he was doing, or why he just focused on school/games/sleep. From the way the story played out, he wasn't supposed to take advantage of his maid without inspiring derision and the ire of the AIGirl he owned, but he most certainly couldn't take advantage of that one either. A Damned of you will, Damned if you don't scenario.
Even the formation of the guild/club/team/syndicate to fight the VAI threat... our original AIGirl had no interest until she could be in charge of it, and even then the idea of her having any responsibilities as the one in charge turned her off. In a broader sense, it was tragically comical how the MC was introduced to the threat of an AIGirl starting an AI Revolution, and the only solution was for him to have a *different* AIGirl be in charge of fighting this revolution... trading one bad master for another, so to speak.
I get it. I was supposed to make different choices as the game progressed. Those choices as presented did not feel organic or natural at all. Sure, turn him into a dominating, lecherous person, and you get the NSFW content. But that just feels like... having to ignore the story and MC's details just for sex scenes.
It is a shame that there does seem to be a lot of potential to this AVN, with how beautifully it is rendered with wonderful looking character designs, but it comes across like "I need to show tits to the player now because they have spent XX amount of time playing" rather than any valid reason for why the MC would see them. Even peeping, or walking into a silent bathroom, or a door left open by accident would be better than "I need to write this AIGirl as insecure for this scene so I can render tits."
So, I'll try again. I'll play the character for the scenes, and not the story... because at this point, with what the MC has faced this early on, I don't know why we aren't given the option to have the MC just throw himself from his own terrace. I mean, I know that would just end the game (and there's no point to **that**), but as written, it feels like that option **should** be available. Not because I want to kill the MC.. but because every time there is a possible reason for him to want to come out of his shell, the story as written slams him back into it. I could get behind an MC who decides enough is enough, and he is going to become a Sex Slave Master. But that isn't this MC.
Another commenter here put it well. Our suspension of disbelief is stretched too thin... beyond the breaking point. And for the record, with all those Patreons having their usernames immortalized on the shelf, you'd think that some (at least one) of them could have helped improved the spelling, grammar, and dialog issues. It kind of comes across like the only thing that matters is money.
I'll start by noting that I am in no way connected with this games production or writing, and only just found this days ago. I feel like you're over-analyzing the unaddressed overarching elements of the story. The 1st AiGirl is tsundere and is playing hard to get it's very obvious and a classic trope. MOST the characters are seemingly designed within specific tropes honestly it's coming together pretty well compared to most VN's. Most the things you mention are addressed within the story over time or are being hinted at, I'm not going to add spoilers you can either notice them yourself or not. MC's situation at the start also seems to be a much *MUCH* larger overarching plot that the story direction seems to be getting to, but has not yet covered. From where things left off it's at a major turning point where some of these questions will probably start to be answered and make more sense. It's also obviously still very early in the story as well, foreshadowing wise I've got a pretty good idea where some of these plots are going to go (its honestly obvious). The lack of random encounter/ "AiGirls not calling the MC or showing up random" etc.. Is obviously due to the point this is at in its production, its still way too early to expect that level of side content. My suggestion to you would just be to put this on the back burner, and wait for a few more updates before you continue. This game isn't even at version 1.0 yet, literally only at v0.3.6. Most your issues are just nitpicking early content, and not being able to follow or notice the overarching plot points. This is actually one of the better VN's on here overarching plot wise the author has made good use of hints and foreshadowing if you know what to look for. As for understanding the characters, my suggestion would be to associate them to the tropes they are obviously leaning towards. I mean no offense it just seems like you missed a lot of the more subtle story elements that you seem to have an issue with. I typically only check these types of titles out to see if I like the general setup or not and then wait for later versions to have a more fleshed out experience. I would say this has lots of potential and recommend waiting until the story is closer to version 1.0 as v0.3.6 is wayyyyy too early to be so critical.
Hmmm... I was curious about the femdom-part, but aside from a few sentences at the beginning, there doesn't seem to be any..? Either my decision on the sai/fai part was "wrong" or.. I dunno. Lately, Akaime even shifted her role as the leader to me. Am I too impatient? Or did I take the "wrong" turn somewhere?
This is a great game! Good animations, good story, good characters! honestly its awesome, if you like nsfw games that have a story building up to them, i recommend downloading this! , ive finished this and now im waiting for newer updates and cant wait!
It´s a great novel visual. In the story every time you have a lot of thinks to do. The cathacthers are friendly and a nice desing 3d. it looks like another games likes teaching feeling that you need take conversations and also every caracther are activate on the novel for continue in the storie. The comedy sometimes is funny and also silly, The caracthers (The protagonation) has a pervert personality sometimes obvisly, i think that sometimes it´s stupid, but meeh, after all is a hentai game, and that a great thinks that i like, because you decided if you want to do the action or not
a year ago, i was saying that the game got a really big potential, that could go as a really good game.
and i have to say that it far, far exceeded my expectations. And i have to comment about this game one more time.
i know the game is far from the end but for now, it's already one of the best 'NSFW' game i've played so far.
i don't know if you're alone behind all this Akaime, but congrats to you.
If you're someone that looks the comments before installing a game, and you are looking to this. PLAY THIS GAME. It's an absolute banger. From the beginning to the last update.
Again, congratulations for what you've done so far, and good luck for the development of the game :)
Hey, I have a question. I've downloaded the current version of Android, but when the content is updated, what exactly do I need to do? Does it update automatically? Do I have to redownload it with the previous version already installed? Or what do I do?
Maybe you can download the file manager, of course, I don't know if the mobile version has an archive function, you can find the directory of the game files in the file manager, find the save (save folder), move the old version of the save to the new game's saves, of course (you may need to save the file separately, in case the new version and the old version conflict) if there is something more knowledgeable can be corrected or supplemented
This is very complicated, it is easier to install the new version over the old one, I changed my cell phone and I couldn't do this, Android doesn't allow it, you would need to root the device
cant wait for the next update honestly i came for the content but stayed for the story because the story is just amazing also I might show my support on patreon soon too when i get the chance
yes you are right! i feel you man it kinda feels like it made in hurry! also everything would be interesting again if they open a reddit community like r/Airevolution or something like that, we as ''Airevolution'' players already have discord server but of course unlucky me can't go there and share my thoughts with others because the app called ''discord'' is very banned in my country. i just want to explore the game even further by joining the game's community but yea it's not giong to happen soon.
After training with Rizette, the Main Story card says that I have to go to the underground in the night, but nothing happens :( maybe I skipped something? Or it's bugged? :(
Intenta ir al subterráneo de noche de día de tarde y si no funciona ve otra vez con rizzete a seguir entrenando ya que me pasó también y hize algo de eso que te mencioné y me la conto
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Is there any pregnancy or inflation content?
Fuck no
You wont believe how many people like this ive seen in dc servers begging for the creators to add pregnancy or cumflation content, I really dont understand what pleasure it gives them to know the person they are fucking has a fucking child in them
It's a kink thing. Even I don't understand them
Theres no reason to kink shame. Even though I don't agree with them it is still rude... Potentially.
Just started playing, it's really cozy >///<
The gallery has only some of the girls or when you unlock more you have more girls to choose on the gallery
when you watch the scenes in game, you will unlock them in the gallery
Really enjoying the direction this is going so far. I did however want to mention that the writing seems to go from a smooth translation in the earlier content, into a more "machine translation" feel in the later story. Some of it comes across as awkwardly worded and is an issue that's common when translating content to English but not editing the phrasing/sentence structure to be proper English. Honestly not too hard to fix with a bit of proof reading or a fan translator to help rearrange some wording here and there. Anyways really good job so far with the story and plot setup, looking forward to future releases and seeing where it goes.
is there pregnancy or belly inflation?
Not yet at least
why we a tiny lil twink bru
It adds plot, trust…
Ok. The AVN looked interesting, like many others here looked interesting. I figured I'd give it a shot. And... I barely got past the prologue before feeling like I had to just... put it aside. I realize that this isn't "fair"... so I am going to try again. But the storytelling is just off... wrong.
I'm not talking about the story idea, AI constructs in human-like bodies that are essentially a new/better form of human wanting to create a revolution. I'm talking about the execution of that concept. Alright. The MC was left alone by his parents, and is bullied, so he keeps to himself. Even his oldest friend, isn't really a friend. Sure, she is pleasant, but when he reaches out to her for inclusion, all she can do is fob him off on other people *SHE* doesn't want to be friends with. When her friends arbitrarily decide not to include him, she doesn't stand up for him. His parents buy him an AIGirl out of guilt because they aren't there for him, and now he has to deal with bullying in his own home. He doesn't even have the option to hold this AIGirl responsible for the way she acts, and the ONLY option is to have a good time watching a movie with her, while she teases him just to make him uncomfortable. The MC is one who apparently enjoys his own company, rather than face a continued stream of rejection... and he doesn't even have that anymore to retreat to. And for us, to enjoy any of the adult content, we have to make choices that are completely OUT of character, for the character we are given to play.
He meets and "saves" another AIGirl who gets injected in his life, who appears to be the polar opposite of the one purchased for him. When she expresses desires for the MC, our "legitimate" first AIGirl only bullies the MC further... not out of actual jealousy, but out of a sense of control.
He meets the rule-breaker in class, talks out of class, is told that she is interested in him playing drums with her band, and then tells him he needs to compete with someone else for the chance. The character, as has been detailed up to this point, would simply reject himself rather than audition and face this new perceived humiliation. Everything up to this point just says he would completely believe in a "Why bother trying, I should just play more games" attitude.
As an experiment, I progressed several weeks into the game, simply showering and going to class, going home, playing games and sleeping. Not one AIGirl ever called/contacted him. There was no concern. After telling the maid what her duties were, that was it. No random scenes involving meals when he got home, no random conversations asking about how he was doing, or why he just focused on school/games/sleep. From the way the story played out, he wasn't supposed to take advantage of his maid without inspiring derision and the ire of the AIGirl he owned, but he most certainly couldn't take advantage of that one either. A Damned of you will, Damned if you don't scenario.
Even the formation of the guild/club/team/syndicate to fight the VAI threat... our original AIGirl had no interest until she could be in charge of it, and even then the idea of her having any responsibilities as the one in charge turned her off. In a broader sense, it was tragically comical how the MC was introduced to the threat of an AIGirl starting an AI Revolution, and the only solution was for him to have a *different* AIGirl be in charge of fighting this revolution... trading one bad master for another, so to speak.
I get it. I was supposed to make different choices as the game progressed. Those choices as presented did not feel organic or natural at all. Sure, turn him into a dominating, lecherous person, and you get the NSFW content. But that just feels like... having to ignore the story and MC's details just for sex scenes.
It is a shame that there does seem to be a lot of potential to this AVN, with how beautifully it is rendered with wonderful looking character designs, but it comes across like "I need to show tits to the player now because they have spent XX amount of time playing" rather than any valid reason for why the MC would see them. Even peeping, or walking into a silent bathroom, or a door left open by accident would be better than "I need to write this AIGirl as insecure for this scene so I can render tits."
So, I'll try again. I'll play the character for the scenes, and not the story... because at this point, with what the MC has faced this early on, I don't know why we aren't given the option to have the MC just throw himself from his own terrace. I mean, I know that would just end the game (and there's no point to **that**), but as written, it feels like that option **should** be available. Not because I want to kill the MC.. but because every time there is a possible reason for him to want to come out of his shell, the story as written slams him back into it. I could get behind an MC who decides enough is enough, and he is going to become a Sex Slave Master. But that isn't this MC.
Another commenter here put it well. Our suspension of disbelief is stretched too thin... beyond the breaking point. And for the record, with all those Patreons having their usernames immortalized on the shelf, you'd think that some (at least one) of them could have helped improved the spelling, grammar, and dialog issues. It kind of comes across like the only thing that matters is money.
I'll start by noting that I am in no way connected with this games production or writing, and only just found this days ago. I feel like you're over-analyzing the unaddressed overarching elements of the story. The 1st AiGirl is tsundere and is playing hard to get it's very obvious and a classic trope. MOST the characters are seemingly designed within specific tropes honestly it's coming together pretty well compared to most VN's. Most the things you mention are addressed within the story over time or are being hinted at, I'm not going to add spoilers you can either notice them yourself or not. MC's situation at the start also seems to be a much *MUCH* larger overarching plot that the story direction seems to be getting to, but has not yet covered. From where things left off it's at a major turning point where some of these questions will probably start to be answered and make more sense. It's also obviously still very early in the story as well, foreshadowing wise I've got a pretty good idea where some of these plots are going to go (its honestly obvious). The lack of random encounter/ "AiGirls not calling the MC or showing up random" etc.. Is obviously due to the point this is at in its production, its still way too early to expect that level of side content. My suggestion to you would just be to put this on the back burner, and wait for a few more updates before you continue. This game isn't even at version 1.0 yet, literally only at v0.3.6. Most your issues are just nitpicking early content, and not being able to follow or notice the overarching plot points. This is actually one of the better VN's on here overarching plot wise the author has made good use of hints and foreshadowing if you know what to look for. As for understanding the characters, my suggestion would be to associate them to the tropes they are obviously leaning towards. I mean no offense it just seems like you missed a lot of the more subtle story elements that you seem to have an issue with. I typically only check these types of titles out to see if I like the general setup or not and then wait for later versions to have a more fleshed out experience. I would say this has lots of potential and recommend waiting until the story is closer to version 1.0 as v0.3.6 is wayyyyy too early to be so critical.
Hmmm... I was curious about the femdom-part, but aside from a few sentences at the beginning, there doesn't seem to be any..? Either my decision on the sai/fai part was "wrong" or.. I dunno. Lately, Akaime even shifted her role as the leader to me. Am I too impatient? Or did I take the "wrong" turn somewhere?
And while we're at it, why can't I choose vai? xP
This is a great game! Good animations, good story, good characters! honestly its awesome, if you like nsfw games that have a story building up to them, i recommend downloading this! , ive finished this and now im waiting for newer updates and cant wait!
Great work improving the script. As a native speaker it makes it much more immersive!
中文！
It´s a great novel visual. In the story every time you have a lot of thinks to do. The cathacthers are friendly and a nice desing 3d. it looks like another games likes teaching feeling that you need take conversations and also every caracther are activate on the novel for continue in the storie. The comedy sometimes is funny and also silly, The caracthers (The protagonation) has a pervert personality sometimes obvisly, i think that sometimes it´s stupid, but meeh, after all is a hentai game, and that a great thinks that i like, because you decided if you want to do the action or not
4.5/5
Пожалуйста разработчики добавьте русский язык
what kind of a request is that lmfaoo
a year ago, i was saying that the game got a really big potential, that could go as a really good game.
and i have to say that it far, far exceeded my expectations. And i have to comment about this game one more time.
i know the game is far from the end but for now, it's already one of the best 'NSFW' game i've played so far.
i don't know if you're alone behind all this Akaime, but congrats to you.
If you're someone that looks the comments before installing a game, and you are looking to this. PLAY THIS GAME. It's an absolute banger. From the beginning to the last update.
Again, congratulations for what you've done so far, and good luck for the development of the game :)
YES
Smth on goddesses' whim level
when update?
On the line of dialogue with the drawing, if you drew a dragon there should be an option for a "dragon deez nuts" joke
can some give me a walkthrough of this game please I want to get all right choices don't want to mess things up :)
Hey there, anyone got some intel about a new version (v0.3.7)? Patreon and itch got last updated 54 days ago.
I also want to know, the discord link doesn't work
They are behind bc of stuff that happened to the creator she said shes almost done with it
thank you for the information.
输入姓名之后没有办法进入游戏
this version add chinese？
Hey, I have a question. I've downloaded the current version of Android, but when the content is updated, what exactly do I need to do? Does it update automatically? Do I have to redownload it with the previous version already installed? Or what do I do?
Maybe you can download the file manager, of course, I don't know if the mobile version has an archive function, you can find the directory of the game files in the file manager, find the save (save folder), move the old version of the save to the new game's saves, of course (you may need to save the file separately, in case the new version and the old version conflict) if there is something more knowledgeable can be corrected or supplemented
This is very complicated, it is easier to install the new version over the old one, I changed my cell phone and I couldn't do this, Android doesn't allow it, you would need to root the device
you can simply download the new version and install over the old one
почему русский язык не доступен?
Английский учи, олух, русский никто добавлять не собирается
cant wait for the next update honestly i came for the content but stayed for the story because the story is just amazing also I might show my support on patreon soon too when i get the chance
I dont know if Im blind but where is the AI Drone located at?
In your bedroom
I barked for khoren and i would do it again
W
The username lmao ts got me cracking XDXD
okay just finished up 0.3.6 and that whole ending sequence was comedically dramatic, and not in an entertaining way
yes you are right! i feel you man it kinda feels like it made in hurry! also everything would be interesting again if they open a reddit community like r/Airevolution or something like that, we as ''Airevolution'' players already have discord server but of course unlucky me can't go there and share my thoughts with others because the app called ''discord'' is very banned in my country. i just want to explore the game even further by joining the game's community but yea it's not giong to happen soon.
should let the player tell kyuu to go fuck herself several scenes before that, playing along for that whole thing is really unsatisfying
thug is 21 in school getting put on timeout, i pray the scenes and story can compensate for this malarke
When is the new update going to be released?
April 10th I think.
in a few days
M00by Like how much
''16 days ago''
Dawg i didn't know 😭 it should have been delayed by a few days, not 45~ bruh
for some reason gamme doesnrt let me choose a floor in the bio ai section in the begginings of katsues quest line, no way forward.
Good game, but can you do a german translation, please? I could help you with that 😉!
jooo ein deutscher!
Hi, wie geht's?
mir gehts gut diggi
mir soweit auch ;)
adamların gözünden petrol akıyor yaw (oil)
Top 1/10 in my favorite
Dose the next update come soon???
''24 days ago''
After training with Rizette, the Main Story card says that I have to go to the underground in the night, but nothing happens :( maybe I skipped something? Or it's bugged? :(
Intenta ir al subterráneo de noche de día de tarde y si no funciona ve otra vez con rizzete a seguir entrenando ya que me pasó también y hize algo de eso que te mencioné y me la conto
ty, but I tried to train more with rizette and I can't train more with her :/
Not that far in but so far I'm really interested in the story! The characters make me feel pretty warm and fuzzy too. :D
还需要加强，一些细节方面的内容显示不到位，比如说做了披萨却没有在内容中显现出来，还有把手放在俩上的画面同样没有，我不得不承认这是一部故事有创新、美工不错的成人视觉小说，还请作者注意对于细节的把控，这有助于提升观看者的体验